Message In a Bottle-Beer-Robert

If you see a little brown bottle,
you’ll know that bottle is from me.
Floating in the vast ocean,
you will see it quite soon.
Open that bottle,
read my message.
It’s for you.
I need
beer.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 10:37 AM
Congratulations on a well deserved win Bob. Love, Carol
Poet Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 9:15 AM
Wonderful message from you Robert!Congrats on your win!--kashinath
Mannan Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 12:46 AM
Super congratulations for this win dear friend.
Ruebel Avatar
March 7, 2011 at 11:19 AM
Hello Robert, This is very funny, I like this one a lot. Congratulations on your win in the contest As Always, Shar
K. Avatar
March 7, 2011 at 8:35 AM
hahaha! I hope you got your beer :) congrats on your win Robert :)
Neels Avatar
March 7, 2011 at 4:06 AM
I also need one :) hehe, congratulations on your win Robert ;)
Dietrich Avatar
March 6, 2011 at 10:54 PM
Oh, another beer one. They were close together on the winners' list and though I don't drink, I sure find them amusing. Congatulations!
Freeman Avatar
March 6, 2011 at 5:46 PM
Great to see you in the top ten Robert. Congratulations on your worthy 7th place honor. Agape, Moses
Onclaud Avatar
March 6, 2011 at 4:00 PM
kudos to you for winning real well, robert! :) huggs, nette
Haick Avatar
March 6, 2011 at 3:27 PM
Congratulations on your 2nd win of the day, Robert! Annalise
Mehta Avatar
March 6, 2011 at 2:21 PM
Congratulations on the seventh place win in the contest of Linda, Robert
Sweetheart Avatar
March 6, 2011 at 12:21 PM
Congrats Robert on your success in my contest.. excellent message with wit luv.. thankxx for supporting always...
Konos Avatar
March 5, 2011 at 11:17 AM
Clever....and best of Luck in the contest
Sweetheart Avatar
March 4, 2011 at 5:58 AM
thankxx for supporting my current contest Robert..good luck.. will read fully as judging time draws closer so as not to spoil my fun or enjoyment of this piece luv.. happy weekend..
Loving Iii Avatar
March 3, 2011 at 3:56 PM
sounds like a personal problem to me. jhl
Fahey Avatar
March 3, 2011 at 3:48 PM
This is great, Robert! Good luck to you in the contest! Ellen
Roberts Avatar
March 3, 2011 at 2:04 PM
lol, love it, best of luck in the contest Robert
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