Message In a Bottle

I cometh through the sand stones of time 
Washed ashore before you were born 
Knowing my voice is silent  
Though determined to find 
The one who prevails 
Through terror reigns 
Set me free 
For you
Love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A   Avatar
July 10, 2015 at 1:44 AM
JUDY, CONGRATS ON YOUR ANY POEM WIN..... ALWAYS & FOREVER ~~LINDA~~
Konos Avatar
July 10, 2015 at 6:53 AM
YO DESTROYER.....thanks Much....
Kimathi Avatar
July 8, 2015 at 10:33 AM
Your poem's body and depth of the message is wonderful! ^_^
Konos Avatar
July 8, 2015 at 10:39 AM
Thanks Teddy kind of you to say so....best...
A  Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 3:50 PM
Judy, thank you for supporting "my ANY POEM contest #7." Have a nice day. Love **SKAT**
Konos Avatar
July 8, 2015 at 10:40 AM
Boot SkAT and Boogie...thank you ....
Buhain-Baello Avatar
May 12, 2015 at 7:11 PM
Fascinating and strong lines, beautifully crafted to convey a message and present a nonet form.
Konos Avatar
July 8, 2015 at 10:40 AM
Thank you Cynthia appreciate it
A   Avatar
April 26, 2015 at 12:09 AM
Judy, Congratulations on your Simply Beautiful # 2 contest win :) Luv ~LINDA~
Konos Avatar
July 8, 2015 at 10:41 AM
Looky here...it's Destroyer....thanks for your comment
Haight Avatar
April 20, 2015 at 12:56 PM
Hi Judy, congratulations on your win for your lovely and interesting mystical poem. Sandra
Konos Avatar
July 8, 2015 at 10:41 AM
Sandra we are missing you big time....let us know how you are...
Allison Avatar
April 20, 2015 at 7:46 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Judy:-) hugs Jan xxx
Deschler Avatar
April 19, 2015 at 7:44 PM
Maybe our destiny is planned further back than we think... This is a very interesting write. Great work, Judy. Congrats on the win!
Konos Avatar
April 20, 2015 at 8:16 AM
Thank You
Manassian Avatar
April 9, 2015 at 1:50 AM
Lovely, Judy. This is a great wrote. Love the form as it brings out that last line so well. Eileen :)
Konos Avatar
April 20, 2015 at 8:16 AM
And thank you too!
Gorelick Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 7:55 PM
An interesting write with more than meets the first read I think. Well done. BG
Konos Avatar
April 20, 2015 at 8:17 AM
Thanks Barbara...I am enjoying your poetry big time!
Cervenka Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 7:49 PM
Very haunting imagery and tone, but like the form. I've never tried it, but you made it look easy. ~jan
Konos Avatar
April 20, 2015 at 8:18 AM
Try it...You'll run circles around me!
Allison Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 7:42 PM
I love the form the poem takes Judy not sure if I have attempted it before. :-) i cant explain it but the imagery of the past gave me a little shiver down my spine! Hugs jan xx
Konos Avatar
April 20, 2015 at 8:19 AM
You shiver! wow.. I'd like to read your shiver poem...wow...gotta be good...
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