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Message In a Bottle

If all my words could reach your soft ears, then tender thoughts could be more clear. You would then know what was missed. And we might have not walked away and just kissed. Second guessing when and why for the day.

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Michael Jordan

Date: 3/11/2011 10:58:00 AM

Michael, this was a wonderful message - I enjoyed the red, mj

Tanya Edwards

Date: 3/8/2011 3:04:00 PM

and stars would fall, and lightening display, I wonder, would it all disapear? I think not, oh sweet love of mine, oh cherished heart oh ,love sublime-sorry Michael, I know you;ve already won this comp, but gosh it brings out the romantic in me-big time xx thank you

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/8/2011 10:23:00 AM

Congratulations on a well deserved 1st place win Michael. Love, Carol

Kash Poet

Date: 3/8/2011 8:46:00 AM

An amazing write from you Michael!Congrats on your 1st place win!!--kashinath

Tahera Mannan

Date: 3/8/2011 12:39:00 AM

Super congratulations for this win dear friend.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/7/2011 4:36:00 PM

Truly lovely. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 3/7/2011 10:38:00 AM

Hello Michael, Congratulations on your wonderful number 1 win, this is truly beautiful....I love it Lov, Shar

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/7/2011 7:38:00 AM

coming back to this romantic message Michael :) Super congrats on your awesome win :)

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/7/2011 3:18:00 AM

Hey Mr. Romance, congratulations to you on winning 1st place, I had a feeling this one would be on top :) love Wilma

Tahera Mannan

Date: 3/7/2011 12:04:00 AM

Such a sweet and sensual message Micheal. many congrats for this win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/6/2011 6:38:00 PM

I'm so glad this placed high. Congrats. It is marvelous.

John Freeman

Date: 3/6/2011 5:22:00 PM

So great to see you at the top in this one Michael. Congratulations on your worthy first place honored poem. Agape, Moses

Constance La France

Date: 3/6/2011 4:42:00 PM

A lovely poem, Michael, and well deserving of first place in Linda's contest~~

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/6/2011 3:36:00 PM

what a fun way to share the spot with you, michael... BEST congrats with hugggs! whattta a wow! :) nette

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/6/2011 3:14:00 PM

Congratulations on your very fine win in Linda's Contest, Michael. Beautiful! Annalise

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/6/2011 2:08:00 PM

Congratulations on the first place win in the contest iof Linda, Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/6/2011 12:05:00 PM

Congrats Michael on your first place win in my contest .. excellent message luv.. thankxx for your support..

Karen Croft

Date: 3/6/2011 8:02:00 AM

nice message in a bottle:-)

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/5/2011 8:23:00 PM

A perfect entry for Linda's "Message in a Bottle" Contest, Michael. A definite winner to me. Always, Annalise

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/5/2011 9:28:00 AM

I can always count on the romantic writes from you Michael! I think a lot of the ladies will be looking for this bottle of yours ;) enjoyed the message you leave here, so sweet like yourself :D -- thanks for passing by my poems, always a delight to here from you --I hope all is well with you too, I'm doing good, thanks :) always--nikko :)

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/5/2011 9:16:00 AM

I am going to search for this bottle lol, sweet and romantic Michael, I am sure Linda will love this one.. All the best for the contest. btw it is extremely hot in CT, trying my best to stay cool - love ya Wilma

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/4/2011 11:25:00 PM

ahhh this one is bittersweet, I really like it, Michael, and Linda will too.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/4/2011 5:35:00 PM

This is beautiful and so romantic, Michael. I'd scour the sea to find a bottle with such a message. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/4/2011 4:51:00 PM

thankxxx for supporting my new contest my White Knight of P.S. and good luck.. will read fully as judging time draws closer but am sure will be amazed.. your Jersey Girl always is luv.. forever and always...

Judy Konos

Date: 3/4/2011 3:23:00 PM

Very nice michael Good Luck