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Message In a Bottle

If all my words could reach your soft ears,
then tender thoughts could be more clear.
You would then know what was missed.
And we might have not walked
away and just kissed.
Second guessing 
when and why
for the
day.

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Michael Jordan

March 11, 2011 at 10:58 AM

Michael, this was a wonderful message - I enjoyed the red, mj

Tanya Edwards

March 8, 2011 at 3:04 PM

and stars would fall, and lightening display, I wonder, would it all disapear? I think not, oh sweet love of mine, oh cherished heart oh ,love sublime-sorry Michael, I know you;ve already won this comp, but gosh it brings out the romantic in me-big time xx thank you

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 8, 2011 at 10:23 AM

Congratulations on a well deserved 1st place win Michael. Love, Carol

Kash Poet

March 8, 2011 at 8:46 AM

An amazing write from you Michael!Congrats on your 1st place win!!--kashinath

Tahera Mannan

March 8, 2011 at 12:39 AM

Super congratulations for this win dear friend.

Joyce Johnson

March 7, 2011 at 4:36 PM

Truly lovely. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Sharon Ruebel

March 7, 2011 at 10:38 AM

Hello Michael, Congratulations on your wonderful number 1 win, this is truly beautiful....I love it Lov, Shar

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

March 7, 2011 at 7:38 AM

coming back to this romantic message Michael :) Super congrats on your awesome win :)

Wilma Neels

March 7, 2011 at 3:18 AM

Hey Mr. Romance, congratulations to you on winning 1st place, I had a feeling this one would be on top :) love Wilma

Tahera Mannan

March 7, 2011 at 12:04 AM

Such a sweet and sensual message Micheal. many congrats for this win.

Andrea Dietrich

March 6, 2011 at 6:38 PM

I'm so glad this placed high. Congrats. It is marvelous.

John Freeman

March 6, 2011 at 5:22 PM

So great to see you at the top in this one Michael. Congratulations on your worthy first place honored poem. Agape, Moses

Constance La France

March 6, 2011 at 4:42 PM

A lovely poem, Michael, and well deserving of first place in Linda's contest~~

Nette Onclaud

March 6, 2011 at 3:36 PM

what a fun way to share the spot with you, michael... BEST congrats with hugggs! whattta a wow! :) nette

Audrey Haick

March 6, 2011 at 3:14 PM

Congratulations on your very fine win in Linda's Contest, Michael. Beautiful! Annalise

Dr.Ram Mehta

March 6, 2011 at 2:08 PM

Congratulations on the first place win in the contest iof Linda, Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 6, 2011 at 12:05 PM

Congrats Michael on your first place win in my contest .. excellent message luv.. thankxx for your support..

Karen Croft

March 6, 2011 at 8:02 AM

nice message in a bottle:-)

Audrey Haick

March 5, 2011 at 8:23 PM

A perfect entry for Linda's "Message in a Bottle" Contest, Michael. A definite winner to me. Always, Annalise

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

March 5, 2011 at 9:28 AM

I can always count on the romantic writes from you Michael! I think a lot of the ladies will be looking for this bottle of yours ;) enjoyed the message you leave here, so sweet like yourself :D -- thanks for passing by my poems, always a delight to here from you --I hope all is well with you too, I'm doing good, thanks :) always--nikko :)

Wilma Neels

March 5, 2011 at 9:16 AM

I am going to search for this bottle lol, sweet and romantic Michael, I am sure Linda will love this one.. All the best for the contest. btw it is extremely hot in CT, trying my best to stay cool - love ya Wilma

Andrea Dietrich

March 4, 2011 at 11:25 PM

ahhh this one is bittersweet, I really like it, Michael, and Linda will too.

Carolyn Devonshire

March 4, 2011 at 5:35 PM

This is beautiful and so romantic, Michael. I'd scour the sea to find a bottle with such a message. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 4, 2011 at 4:51 PM

thankxxx for supporting my new contest my White Knight of P.S. and good luck.. will read fully as judging time draws closer but am sure will be amazed.. your Jersey Girl always is luv.. forever and always...