Message In a Bottle

Today I may go to the beach In my mind I might reach Play in the sand Wiggle my toes Giggling in and out of the foamy woabs Sea shells talk they sigh of messages in bottles that never beach. Love me, love me They all say Don't reject me I won't stay I will make the rules now I've got all the tools now.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Neels Avatar
September 6, 2010 at 5:12 AM
Judith this piece has a lyrical feel to it.. enjoyed it, :) Wilma
Palli Avatar
September 6, 2010 at 1:52 AM
Nice one!
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