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Message In A Bottle - Jinn - Jimmy

If you're reading this message beware. I was trapped in here centuries. I've escaped into the air. I'm roaming in the breeze. Freedom paid by fare. Hope I won't freeze. I am rare. Hear sneeze? Jinn

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/8/2011 10:34:00 AM
Congratulations on a well deserved win Jimmy. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/8/2011 9:10:00 AM
Congrats Jimmy on your big win in the contest of Linda!--kashinath
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Date: 3/8/2011 12:44:00 AM
Super congratulations for this win dear friend.
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Date: 3/7/2011 10:57:00 AM
Hello Jimmy, Congratulations on your win in the contest with this very witty write. I enjoyed this one very much..... As Always, Shar
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Date: 3/7/2011 8:32:00 AM
Congrats on your win with this unique take Jimmy!
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Date: 3/7/2011 3:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Linda's contest Jimmy :)
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Date: 3/7/2011 12:17:00 AM
Super one Jimmy. Loved it. many congrats for this win.
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Date: 3/6/2011 10:52:00 PM
A fun read, Jimmy. Congratulations.
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Date: 3/6/2011 5:42:00 PM
Great to see you in the top ten Jimmy. Congratulations on your worthy 6th place honor. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/6/2011 3:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your fine sixth Place win in the contest, JAM. Love, Annalise
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Date: 3/6/2011 2:19:00 PM
Congratulations on the sixth place win in the contest of Linda, Jimmy
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Date: 3/6/2011 12:18:00 PM
Congrats Jimmy on your success in my contest.. excellent message luv.. thankxx for your constant support...
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Date: 3/6/2011 12:15:00 AM
You are "rare" and this is awesome! Good luck in the contest...Love,Deb
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Date: 3/4/2011 6:02:00 AM
thankxx for supporting my current contest Jimmy.. good luck... will read fully as judging time draws closer so as not to spoil my fun and enjoyment of this piece luv.. happy weekend..
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Date: 3/3/2011 4:29:00 PM
By the way, you really are "rare." And that's a compliment!
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Date: 3/3/2011 4:28:00 PM
Jimmy, you have taken the contest to a whole new level. I know you were speaking of your own life and you have "paid." Love you, brother, Carolyn
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Date: 3/3/2011 2:27:00 PM
lol! Delightful one, JAM. Glad I caught this one. Best of luck with this even though not necessary..destiny calls a winner. Love, Annalise
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Date: 3/3/2011 1:36:00 PM
a livley write, thank you for your comment.
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Date: 3/3/2011 1:03:00 PM
cute, I like it, good luck in the contest
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