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Message In a Bottle - Here - John

Our excursion brushed past bashing tides. An uncharted desert shelter is where the vessel resides. Stripped of rhyme and reason; I behold demons strumming spiked lyres yielding me lonely here.

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Doreen Wright

Date: 8/19/2012 8:14:00 PM

What a message John! I truly love your nonet! I am also grateful for the honorable mention in your contest. It made me smile :-)

Deborah Burch

Date: 7/10/2012 5:00:00 PM

ooooo, I love this John...very nice Nonet! wonderful thoughts--wonderfully deep...:) love ya, deb

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/10/2011 9:04:00 AM

Sent you a Soup mail, John. I hadn't posted the poem. After reading your blog, I thought you were looking for poems about main courses, not candy. I just posted it now, so your contest has closed. Just wanted to be helpful, not expecting to win. Have fun with the contest judging. I'm not big on writing about food. Been having health problems and am on a strict diet now. Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/8/2011 10:25:00 AM

Congratulations on a well deserved win John. Love, Carol

Kash Poet

Date: 3/8/2011 8:47:00 AM

Congrats John on your big win in the contest of Linda!Enjoyed your poem---kashinath

Kory Calhoun

Date: 3/7/2011 7:13:00 PM

Hey John Congratulations on your win in Linda's contest. Very well written as all your poems are. You have the magic touch. Best wishes, KC

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 3/7/2011 10:41:00 AM

Hello John, Congratulations on your first place in the contest. Well done, I like this one very much As Always, Shar

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/7/2011 7:45:00 AM

What a very different take on the challenge, John, with very engaging lines too :) Super congrats on the awesome 2nd place win and Thank you as well for my HM in your contest :) I am really happy to be in your list-- thanks :D

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/7/2011 3:26:00 AM

Hey there John, congratulations to you on your win in the contest and with your poems being selected for the soup contest, love Wilma

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/6/2011 9:26:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, John. Best wishes, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/6/2011 6:41:00 PM

what a fantastical little tale this challenge inspired from you, john. a big congratulations on your awesome win, and also on getting three poems into the soup contest! Luv, Andrea

Cecil Hickman

Date: 3/6/2011 6:16:00 PM

congratulations on your second place win with this beautiful worded nonet...wonderfully penned ,,and I want to thank you for all your visits and for the comments that you have left behind,,Blessings..Cecil

John Freeman

Date: 3/6/2011 5:25:00 PM

So great to see you at the top in this one John. Congratulations on your worthy second place honored poem. Agape, Moses

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/6/2011 3:38:00 PM

rise and shine, john! congrats with amiles to yuo.. :) huggs, nette

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/6/2011 3:15:00 PM

Congratulations on your very fine and deserving win in Linda's Contest, John. Annalise

Matt Caliri

Date: 3/6/2011 2:56:00 PM

Nice Nonet! I appreciate your appreciation for my poem, and it's resultant high placing in your contest...I got that thing in in the nick of time apprarently! Thanks again...(also check soupmail)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/6/2011 2:10:00 PM

Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of Linda, John

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/6/2011 12:07:00 PM

Congrats John on your success in my contest .. excellent message.. thankxx for your support..

Walayee Poet Lay Whitlock-Ishway

Date: 3/6/2011 6:34:00 AM

Great write John with wonderful imagery. Love it... Lay

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/5/2011 4:42:00 PM

Soup mail returned, John.

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 3/4/2011 1:15:00 PM

superb 'message in a bottle'...

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/4/2011 10:41:00 AM

Nice message, good luck in the contest, John

Sarah Hales

Date: 3/4/2011 10:36:00 AM

Intresting writing ..it hept me wanting more Sarah x

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/4/2011 9:49:00 AM

Well done, John! I enjoyed the perspective you took. On an uncharted desert island, I imagine demons would haunt us. The first line is awesome - creative description and a touch of alliteration. Wishing you success in the contest. I have been working on something that's a bit "out there" for your contest. Keep rewriting and revising. Hope it's okay to write about a real person. Love, Carolyn

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/4/2011 8:02:00 AM

i like the fast then slow effect of this nonet, john.. smashing! best winning winshes to you! :) hugggs, nette