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Message In a Bottle - Help - Bob

I've been marooned on this isle for months
Sharks circle here licking their chops
Haven't had very much grub
Just some coconut meat
No gals in grass skirts
Tsunami near
Oh dear me
Ahoy
Help

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Placed No. 5 in Linda-Marie's "Message In A Bottle" Contest - March 2011

Copyright © Robert L. Hinshaw | Year Posted 2011

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Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 3/8/2011 10:32:00 AM Congratulations on a well deserved win Robert. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 3/8/2011 9:05:00 AM Wonderful write from you Robert!Congrats on your win!---kashinath Login to Reply

Tahera Mannan Date: 3/8/2011 12:43:00 AM Super congratulations for this win dear friend. Login to Reply

Sharon Ruebel Date: 3/7/2011 10:52:00 AM Hello Robert, Congratulations on your successful win in this contest. This is so witty and fun I love it! As Always, Shar Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 3/7/2011 8:31:00 AM coming back here to say Congrats on this very fun write Bob :) Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 3/7/2011 3:48:00 AM Hehe, what a joy to read this one again Bob!! Congratulations on your win in Linda's contest.. Enjoy the week ahead :) Login to Reply

Tahera Mannan Date: 3/7/2011 12:13:00 AM haha a really good one. many congrats for this win. Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 3/6/2011 5:36:00 PM So great to see you in the top five in this one Bob. Congratulations on your worthy fifth place honored poem. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 3/6/2011 5:36:00 PM So great to see you in the top five in this one Bob. Congratulations on your worthy fifth place honored poem. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 3/6/2011 3:54:00 PM robert, a trophy for you and big COMGRATS for the super win..:) huggs, nette Login to Reply

Audrey Haick Date: 3/6/2011 3:22:00 PM Congratulations on your fine 5th Place win in Linda's contest, Bob. Annalise Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 3/6/2011 2:16:00 PM Congratulations on the fifth place win in the contest of Linda, Bob Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 3/6/2011 12:59:00 PM Congratsm my friend and poet.. well done and well deserved...Michael Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 3/6/2011 12:15:00 PM Congrats Bob on your success in my contest.. excellent message luv.. thankxx for your ever constant support... Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 3/5/2011 12:15:00 PM Oh my word, you sure have a wee bit of a problem Mr. H.. Hopefully home is on the way :) Always enjoy your humor. All the best for Linda's contest :) Wilma Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 3/5/2011 11:45:00 AM oh noooo!! Yikes I hope help got to you in time, Bob!! Super enjoyed reading this Bob,, Linda sure has some amazing entries :)! Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 3/5/2011 6:48:00 AM Great write my friend!!! Either way I will get you the football sores lol Enjoy your weekend my Poet friend... Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 3/4/2011 1:59:00 PM hey NO address LOL..Light & Love Login to Reply

Ralph Taylor Date: 3/4/2011 10:36:00 AM Excellent entry, Sarge. Enjoyed. Good luck. Have a super weekend. Ralphie Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/4/2011 8:15:00 AM A good and fun one!! Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 3/4/2011 5:25:00 AM thankxx for supporting my current contest Bob ...good luck.. will read fully as judging time draws closer so as not to spoil my fun and enjoyment of the piece luv..happy weekend.. Login to Reply

Sharon Ruebel Date: 3/3/2011 4:00:00 PM Hello Bob, OMG I am still laughing! This is so funny, you sir are a very cleaver poet....... Looks like a winner to me As Always, Shar Login to Reply

John Loving Iii Date: 3/3/2011 3:37:00 PM ok robertson carouso. jhlovingiii Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 3/3/2011 1:13:00 PM You had me giggling, Bob. If you ever find yourself in this predicament, make a spear from the coconut trees and try to kill some sharks. They'll at least keep you alive...until the tsunami hits! Funny poem, my friend. Love, Carolyn (I really was called "weird Carolyn" for the reasons described in the poem. LOL Best wishes in the contest -- it would be hard to top this one! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Jimmy Anderson Date: 3/3/2011 1:08:00 PM Very funny Bob...good luck in the contest. Jimmy Login to Reply

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