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Message In a Bottle - Burp - Joe

This bottle once was full of cold beer Now only this dumb note is here The author’s mind not so clear Message garbled, I fear Hoping land is near Trying to steer Must now veer Oh Dear Burp

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/8/2011 10:37:00 AM

Congratulations on a well deserved win Joe. Love, Carol

Kash Poet

Date: 3/8/2011 9:13:00 AM

Funny write Joe,enjoyed!Congrats on your win in the contest of Linda!---kashinath

Tahera Mannan

Date: 3/8/2011 12:45:00 AM

Super congratulations for this win dear friend.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/7/2011 2:09:00 PM

You're so funny, Joe. Keep us laughing! Congratulations on your win. Love, Carolyn

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 3/7/2011 11:18:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the contest Joe, this is witty and fun. I love it. As Always, Shar

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/7/2011 8:33:00 AM

Congrats on your win with this fun & witty nonet Joe :)

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/7/2011 4:04:00 AM

Oh dear and congratulations Joe all in one breath before I burp :)

Tahera Mannan

Date: 3/7/2011 12:19:00 AM

Haha. Good funny message. many congrats for this win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/6/2011 10:53:00 PM

Joe, yours was priceless!! congrats

John Freeman

Date: 3/6/2011 5:45:00 PM

Great to see you in the top ten Joe. Congratulations on your worthy 6th place honor. Agape, Moses

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/6/2011 3:59:00 PM

here's to another mug for the great win, joe.. CONGRATS! :) huggs, nette

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/6/2011 3:26:00 PM

Congratulations on you fine sixth place win in the contest, Joe. Double congrats. Annalise

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/6/2011 2:20:00 PM

Congratulations on the sixth place win in the contest of Linda, Joe

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/6/2011 12:20:00 PM

Congrats Joe on your success in my contest.. excellent message luv.. thankxx for your support always...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/4/2011 8:18:00 AM

hahaha, great how you did yours!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/4/2011 5:59:00 AM

thankxx for supporting my current contest Joe.. good luck.. will read fully as judging time draws closer so as not to spoil my fun and enjoyment of this piece ..luv.. happy weekend..

Ellen Fahey

Date: 3/3/2011 3:50:00 PM

Hahaha! Good one! Good luck! Ellen

Francine Roberts

Date: 3/3/2011 2:05:00 PM

too funny, best of luck in the contest Joe