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Message in a Bottle - Burp - Joe

This bottle once was full of cold beer Now only this dumb note is here The author’s mind not so clear Message garbled, I fear Hoping land is near Trying to steer Must now veer Oh Dear Burp

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/8/2011 10:37:00 AM
Congratulations on a well deserved win Joe. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/8/2011 9:13:00 AM
Funny write Joe,enjoyed!Congrats on your win in the contest of Linda!---kashinath
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Date: 3/8/2011 12:45:00 AM
Super congratulations for this win dear friend.
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Date: 3/7/2011 2:09:00 PM
You're so funny, Joe. Keep us laughing! Congratulations on your win. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/7/2011 11:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest Joe, this is witty and fun. I love it. As Always, Shar
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Date: 3/7/2011 8:33:00 AM
Congrats on your win with this fun & witty nonet Joe :)
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Date: 3/7/2011 4:04:00 AM
Oh dear and congratulations Joe all in one breath before I burp :)
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Date: 3/7/2011 12:19:00 AM
Haha. Good funny message. many congrats for this win.
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Date: 3/6/2011 10:53:00 PM
Joe, yours was priceless!! congrats
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Date: 3/6/2011 5:45:00 PM
Great to see you in the top ten Joe. Congratulations on your worthy 6th place honor. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/6/2011 3:59:00 PM
here's to another mug for the great win, joe.. CONGRATS! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 3/6/2011 3:26:00 PM
Congratulations on you fine sixth place win in the contest, Joe. Double congrats. Annalise
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Date: 3/6/2011 2:20:00 PM
Congratulations on the sixth place win in the contest of Linda, Joe
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Date: 3/6/2011 12:20:00 PM
Congrats Joe on your success in my contest.. excellent message luv.. thankxx for your support always...
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Date: 3/4/2011 8:18:00 AM
hahaha, great how you did yours!!
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Date: 3/4/2011 5:59:00 AM
thankxx for supporting my current contest Joe.. good luck.. will read fully as judging time draws closer so as not to spoil my fun and enjoyment of this piece ..luv.. happy weekend..
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Date: 3/3/2011 3:50:00 PM
Hahaha! Good one! Good luck! Ellen
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Date: 3/3/2011 2:05:00 PM
too funny, best of luck in the contest Joe
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