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Message in a Bottle-Rite-Cecil

Since you found my words, my seal was tight.
Please read, do not have any fright.
These words, be my last, tonight.
To my wife, heavens lights,
I have taken flight.
No longer fight,
Our twelfth night,
Ignites
Rite 


written for

Sponsor Linda-Marie The Sweetheart of P.S. 
Contest Name "MESSAGE IN A BOTTLE" 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/8/2011 10:28:00 AM
Congratulations on a well deserved win Cecil. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/8/2011 8:54:00 AM
Very good rhyming here,cecil!Congrats on your big win!!--kashinath
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Date: 3/7/2011 10:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest, this is wonderful! As Always, Shar
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Date: 3/7/2011 8:01:00 AM
Super congrats on your rhyming nonet-- and what a comforting message you give here too Cecil :)
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Date: 3/7/2011 3:37:00 AM
Cecil, congratulations on your 3rd place win in Linda's contest with this rhyming gem :)
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Date: 3/6/2011 6:43:00 PM
Way to go with your message, Cecil. How nice that you rhymed yours too! LUv, andrea
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Date: 3/6/2011 5:28:00 PM
So great to see you at the top in this one Cecil. Congratulations on your worthy third place honored poem. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/6/2011 3:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your very fine win in the Contest, Cecil. Annalise
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Date: 3/6/2011 2:13:00 PM
Congratulations on the third place win in the contest of Linda, cecil
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Date: 3/6/2011 12:10:00 PM
Congrats Cecil on your success in my contest .. excellent message.. thankxx for your constant support luv..
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Date: 3/4/2011 11:38:00 AM
The weekend is here and I am trying to get some poetry read. I am glad you had something new here for me to enjoy today Andrea. I wish you a wonderful weekend filled with new found inspiration. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/4/2011 8:27:00 AM
ahhh, a sad one, Cecil!! I enjoyed reading it! Best of luck in the contest,Cecil. ENjoyed hearing more about about your name.
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Date: 3/4/2011 5:37:00 AM
thankxx for supporting my current contest Cecil and good luck... will read fully as judging time draws closer so as not to spoil my fun and enjoyment of this piece.. appreciate your lovely sweet comment...thankxx and happy weekend ...
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Date: 3/3/2011 10:15:00 PM
Very nice, Cecil. I was really intrigued by the igniting of the rite on the "Twelfth Night." Is this a tradition for you? A ritual of some kind, or a reference to Shakespeare's "Twelfth Night"? Best wishes in the contest, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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