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Message In a Bottle-Rite-Cecil

Since you found my words, my seal was tight. Please read, do not have any fright. These words, be my last, tonight. To my wife, heavens lights, I have taken flight. No longer fight, Our twelfth night, Ignites Rite written for Sponsor Linda-Marie The Sweetheart of P.S. Contest Name "MESSAGE IN A BOTTLE"

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/8/2011 10:28:00 AM

Congratulations on a well deserved win Cecil. Love, Carol

Kash Poet

Date: 3/8/2011 8:54:00 AM

Very good rhyming here,cecil!Congrats on your big win!!--kashinath

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 3/7/2011 10:44:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the contest, this is wonderful! As Always, Shar

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/7/2011 8:01:00 AM

Super congrats on your rhyming nonet-- and what a comforting message you give here too Cecil :)

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/7/2011 3:37:00 AM

Cecil, congratulations on your 3rd place win in Linda's contest with this rhyming gem :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/6/2011 6:43:00 PM

Way to go with your message, Cecil. How nice that you rhymed yours too! LUv, andrea

John Freeman

Date: 3/6/2011 5:28:00 PM

So great to see you at the top in this one Cecil. Congratulations on your worthy third place honored poem. Agape, Moses

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/6/2011 3:18:00 PM

Congratulations on your very fine win in the Contest, Cecil. Annalise

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/6/2011 2:13:00 PM

Congratulations on the third place win in the contest of Linda, cecil

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/6/2011 12:10:00 PM

Congrats Cecil on your success in my contest .. excellent message.. thankxx for your constant support luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/4/2011 11:38:00 AM

The weekend is here and I am trying to get some poetry read. I am glad you had something new here for me to enjoy today Andrea. I wish you a wonderful weekend filled with new found inspiration. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/4/2011 8:27:00 AM

ahhh, a sad one, Cecil!! I enjoyed reading it! Best of luck in the contest,Cecil. ENjoyed hearing more about about your name.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/4/2011 5:37:00 AM

thankxx for supporting my current contest Cecil and good luck... will read fully as judging time draws closer so as not to spoil my fun and enjoyment of this piece.. appreciate your lovely sweet comment...thankxx and happy weekend ...

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/3/2011 10:15:00 PM

Very nice, Cecil. I was really intrigued by the igniting of the rite on the "Twelfth Night." Is this a tradition for you? A ritual of some kind, or a reference to Shakespeare's "Twelfth Night"? Best wishes in the contest, my friend. Love, Carolyn