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Message In A Bottle-Death-Tahera

I have at last reached this divine shore
Where no man has ever set foot
No dirty trash can be found
In this peaceful retreat
Nature's soft silence
As peace returns
On tip toes
To meet
Death

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/8/2011 10:32:00 AM
Congratulations on a well deserved win Tahera. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/8/2011 9:07:00 AM
Congrats Tahera on your big win in the contest of Linda!Enjoyed your poem!--kashinath
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Date: 3/7/2011 10:54:00 AM
You almost make me feel like death is enchanting in this beautiful poem Congratulations on your win in this contest Tahera, you have a beautiful soul Lov, Shar
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Date: 3/7/2011 8:10:00 AM
Hi again Tahera :) Super congrats on your win with this moving nonet :D
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Date: 3/7/2011 3:50:00 AM
Lovely message of acceptance Tahera, congratulations on your win in Linda's contest, love Wilma
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Date: 3/6/2011 6:48:00 PM
Oh, my such sweetness and still death resides. VEry good writing, Tahera. A big congratulations.
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Date: 3/6/2011 5:38:00 PM
So great to see you in the top five in this one Tahera. Congratulations on your worthy fifth place honored poem. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/6/2011 3:55:00 PM
CHEERS for the fine win, tahera.. great stuff.:) huggs,nette
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Date: 3/6/2011 3:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your fine 5th Place win in the contest. Always, Annalise
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Date: 3/6/2011 2:17:00 PM
Congratulations on the fifth place win in the contest of Linda, Tahera
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Date: 3/6/2011 1:00:00 PM
Congrats my dear Poet friend with this wonderful piece...luv Michael
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Date: 3/6/2011 12:17:00 PM
Congrats Tahera on your success in my contest .. excellent message..powerful... thankxx for your constant support ...
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Date: 3/5/2011 11:38:00 AM
Hi Tahera -- I really like how your nonet here exudes that feeling of acceptance-- I came back from a wake today and this seems very fitting to read for me... liked how you say "divine shore" as well--- nikko :)
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Date: 3/4/2011 7:28:00 AM
The "divine shore" sounds like a place I'd like to be. We may have to tip toe and meet Death before we reach such a panacea. Litter is everywhere, dear, and a problem in the states as well as other countries. Enjoyed the soothing quality of your poem and wish you success in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/4/2011 1:09:00 AM
very strong once again meaning so powerful
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