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Message In a Bottle-Death-Tahera

I have at last reached this divine shore Where no man has ever set foot No dirty trash can be found In this peaceful retreat Nature's soft silence As peace returns On tip toes To meet Death

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/8/2011 10:32:00 AM

Congratulations on a well deserved win Tahera. Love, Carol

Kash Poet

Date: 3/8/2011 9:07:00 AM

Congrats Tahera on your big win in the contest of Linda!Enjoyed your poem!--kashinath

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 3/7/2011 10:54:00 AM

You almost make me feel like death is enchanting in this beautiful poem Congratulations on your win in this contest Tahera, you have a beautiful soul Lov, Shar

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/7/2011 8:10:00 AM

Hi again Tahera :) Super congrats on your win with this moving nonet :D

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/7/2011 3:50:00 AM

Lovely message of acceptance Tahera, congratulations on your win in Linda's contest, love Wilma

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/6/2011 6:48:00 PM

Oh, my such sweetness and still death resides. VEry good writing, Tahera. A big congratulations.

John Freeman

Date: 3/6/2011 5:38:00 PM

So great to see you in the top five in this one Tahera. Congratulations on your worthy fifth place honored poem. Agape, Moses

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/6/2011 3:55:00 PM

CHEERS for the fine win, tahera.. great stuff.:) huggs,nette

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/6/2011 3:23:00 PM

Congratulations on your fine 5th Place win in the contest. Always, Annalise

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/6/2011 2:17:00 PM

Congratulations on the fifth place win in the contest of Linda, Tahera

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 3/6/2011 1:00:00 PM

Congrats my dear Poet friend with this wonderful piece...luv Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/6/2011 12:17:00 PM

Congrats Tahera on your success in my contest .. excellent message..powerful... thankxx for your constant support ...

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/5/2011 11:38:00 AM

Hi Tahera -- I really like how your nonet here exudes that feeling of acceptance-- I came back from a wake today and this seems very fitting to read for me... liked how you say "divine shore" as well--- nikko :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/4/2011 7:28:00 AM

The "divine shore" sounds like a place I'd like to be. We may have to tip toe and meet Death before we reach such a panacea. Litter is everywhere, dear, and a problem in the states as well as other countries. Enjoyed the soothing quality of your poem and wish you success in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Duncan Chappell

Date: 3/4/2011 1:09:00 AM

very strong once again meaning so powerful