Message In a Bottle-Beer-Robert

If you see a little brown bottle,
you’ll know that bottle is from me.
Floating in the vast ocean,
you will see it quite soon.
Open that bottle,
read my message.
It’s for you.
I need
beer.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 3/8/2011 10:37:00 AM
Congratulations on a well deserved win Bob. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/8/2011 9:15:00 AM
Wonderful message from you Robert!Congrats on your win!--kashinath
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Date: 3/8/2011 12:46:00 AM
Super congratulations for this win dear friend.
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Date: 3/7/2011 11:19:00 AM
Hello Robert, This is very funny, I like this one a lot. Congratulations on your win in the contest As Always, Shar
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Date: 3/7/2011 8:35:00 AM
hahaha! I hope you got your beer :) congrats on your win Robert :)
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Date: 3/7/2011 4:06:00 AM
I also need one :) hehe, congratulations on your win Robert ;)
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Date: 3/6/2011 10:54:00 PM
Oh, another beer one. They were close together on the winners' list and though I don't drink, I sure find them amusing. Congatulations!
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Date: 3/6/2011 5:46:00 PM
Great to see you in the top ten Robert. Congratulations on your worthy 7th place honor. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/6/2011 4:00:00 PM
kudos to you for winning real well, robert! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 3/6/2011 3:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your 2nd win of the day, Robert! Annalise
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Date: 3/6/2011 2:21:00 PM
Congratulations on the seventh place win in the contest of Linda, Robert
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Date: 3/6/2011 12:21:00 PM
Congrats Robert on your success in my contest.. excellent message with wit luv.. thankxx for supporting always...
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Date: 3/5/2011 11:17:00 AM
Clever....and best of Luck in the contest
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Date: 3/4/2011 5:58:00 AM
thankxx for supporting my current contest Robert..good luck.. will read fully as judging time draws closer so as not to spoil my fun or enjoyment of this piece luv.. happy weekend..
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Date: 3/3/2011 3:56:00 PM
sounds like a personal problem to me. jhl
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Date: 3/3/2011 3:48:00 PM
This is great, Robert! Good luck to you in the contest! Ellen
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Date: 3/3/2011 2:04:00 PM
lol, love it, best of luck in the contest Robert
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