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Message Has Been Seen

You’re much too proud to answer Don’t want to appear too keen But every single message sent Has a check mark…meaning “seen”! Won’t start up conversations You won’t ask me how I’ve been You keep it all under wraps But my messages are…..”seen”! You won’t come out and say it But I know you’ve checked the screen You answer what’s in my eyes For my messages you’ve “seen”! Sometimes I get so angry I resolve myself to wean From writing all my feelings… But then the message comes…”seen”! And so I keep on writing Though you TRY to act so mean At the end of every day All my messages are…..”seen”! Eileen Manassian Ghali

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/8/2012 1:14:00 PM
Wow, this poem is spectacular, by far one of my favorites I have ever read (and I'm not just saying that). Is it published or what? It's really good, and you are extremely talented... I've read some of your other poems as well. You should visit my site: poeticpossibilities.tk ! I think this poem could have a really good chance of winning one of our contests! Wish you the best with your poetry and I hope you get published! : )Jacob Cramer LOVIN IT! Keep it up!
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Date: 12/8/2012 8:42:00 AM
The comments, good or just polite, are the reasons we put parts of ourselves out there! The number of "views" is more important than the number who write a review. Everyone here can certainly identify with this... love and hugs, Jack
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/8/2012 10:15:00 AM
Jack, thanks ever so much for your post. I appreciate it so much. :) Have a lovely evening. I know the views are important, but I so enjoy the posts too! :)
Date: 12/7/2012 9:56:00 PM
I enjoyed your poem. For the final message hold the "z" key down severely / The person at the other end should get that message clearly. Have a wonderful weekend.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/8/2012 12:15:00 AM
Thanks, Jon. Good advice! :)
Date: 12/7/2012 2:57:00 PM
xox~ PD
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/7/2012 4:59:00 PM
XOXO Right back at ya!

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