Oliver Mckeithan Poet Pleiades

Mess

Mess

Making a 
Mess is for children and pets but not for
Me. At least so I think, but 
My wife tells
Me otherwise. However, I have 
My own way of organizing things. I think she likes
Making my life miserable

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Kim Rodrigues April 4, 2025 at 11:47 AM Though simple words are used to begin each line. Love the telling! Oliver Mckeithan April 4, 2025 at 11:48 AM Thanks much Kim. Appreciate your comments

Paula Goldsmith April 4, 2025 at 11:02 AM I enjoyed reading your fun "Mess" write. Each one has their own way of doing things. Have a wonderful day/weekend writing away.................. Oliver Mckeithan April 4, 2025 at 11:46 AM Thanks Paula. Yep. It is trying to reconcile the different ways in the same household.