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During your twirling soliloquy & throbbing zeal for endless dalliance beckon me will come again & again to your eyrie on rainy days on frosty darks exacerbating flames of queasy symptoms wren winnows mesquite ambiance magnifies relish crave & devotee shake leaves nodding piano & softer cuddle drums memorabilia weary in perky straits Written: November 18, 2022 A Brian Strand Premiere Choice Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.

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Date: 11/21/2022 7:46:00 PM
Unrivalled master in the open form ......! Congratulations on your top win, dear Lasaad !
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Date: 11/21/2022 9:58:00 AM
EXCELLENT Big Congrats to win Have good days
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Date: 11/20/2022 9:39:00 PM
A beautiful work. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/20/2022 6:08:00 PM
Quite unique Lasaad. You are becoming a master of the open form! Not an easy task! Lovely word pictures and images! Congratulations on your win. Also thank you for your Beauty of the Night theme. I got so involved in this wonderful this theme I missed your contest but it gave birth to two additional poems. Many thanks. Blessing!
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Date: 11/18/2022 2:35:00 PM
A challenging form to write poetry in, Lasaad. You did a good job and have a good entry for the contest. Thanks for reading and commenting on my poems, my friend. Bill
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Date: 11/18/2022 1:32:00 PM
Another winning poem from you my friend. Words adorn your poetry in this form.
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Date: 11/18/2022 1:24:00 PM
A FAVE! Nothing more to add, my dearest friend, Lasaad! Be blessed!
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