Mesquite Threshing

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During 
your 
   twirling 
soliloquy
&
    throbbing 
zeal 
   for
     endless
dalliance 
    beckon 
me 

will 
  come 
    again
&
     again 
to 
  your 
     eyrie

on
   rainy days

on
   frosty darks 

exacerbating
    flames 
of
    queasy
symptoms

wren
    winnows
mesquite 

   ambiance 
magnifies
    relish
crave
   &
devotee
   shake
leaves
   nodding
piano
   &
softer

   cuddle
drums
   memorabilia 

weary 
  in 
  perky 
straits

Written: November 18, 2022

A Brian Strand Premiere Choice Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Brian Strand

NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE   using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.

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Date: 11/21/2022 7:46:00 PM
Unrivalled master in the open form ......! Congratulations on your top win, dear Lasaad !
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Date: 11/21/2022 9:58:00 AM
EXCELLENT Big Congrats to win Have good days
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Date: 11/20/2022 9:39:00 PM
A beautiful work. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/20/2022 6:08:00 PM
Quite unique Lasaad. You are becoming a master of the open form! Not an easy task! Lovely word pictures and images! Congratulations on your win. Also thank you for your Beauty of the Night theme. I got so involved in this wonderful this theme I missed your contest but it gave birth to two additional poems. Many thanks. Blessing!
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Date: 11/18/2022 2:35:00 PM
A challenging form to write poetry in, Lasaad. You did a good job and have a good entry for the contest. Thanks for reading and commenting on my poems, my friend. Bill
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Date: 11/18/2022 1:32:00 PM
Another winning poem from you my friend. Words adorn your poetry in this form.
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Date: 11/18/2022 1:24:00 PM
A FAVE! Nothing more to add, my dearest friend, Lasaad! Be blessed!
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