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Mesmerized By Love

The church had become a romantic place The groom was mesmerized by his true love The bride walked down the aisle with poise and grace The church had become a romantic place Her wedding dress adorned with pearls and lace Their connection sent from heaven above The church had become a romantic place The groom was mesmerized by his true love The bride walked down the aisle with poise and grace The church had become a romantic place Her wedding dress adorned with pearls and lace Their connection sent from heaven above The groom was mesmerized by his true love Their journey soared like wings of a dove 06/12/2021 Written for Write A “Trionet” For Me Poetry Contest Sponsored by L Milton Hankins

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Date: 11/9/2021 4:01:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your contest entry. Yes, the church does become a place of love occasionally when that wedding takes place. I don't know how long the love last but it is there at that moment. I remember one wedding I went to years and years ago. The couple argued before the wedding. I was just a child and I thought will this marriage last. It did not. Sara
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Date: 7/22/2021 8:45:00 PM
Weddings are always beautiful , good luck in the contest. Soup mail. Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/14/2021 6:10:00 PM
WoW! Evelyn, This is a lovely entry for the contest. I could just picture the beautiful bride and her groom saying their vows in the church. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Evelyn Swartz
Date: 6/14/2021 11:59:00 PM
Thank you for the beautiful comment

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