Evelyn Swartz Poet Sonnet

Mesmerized By Love

The church had become a romantic place
The groom was mesmerized by his true love
The bride walked down the aisle with poise and grace
The church had become a romantic place
Her wedding dress adorned with pearls and lace
Their connection sent from heaven above
The church had become a romantic place
The groom was mesmerized by his true love

The bride walked down the aisle with poise and grace
The church had become a romantic place
Her wedding dress adorned with pearls and lace
Their connection sent from heaven above
The groom was mesmerized by his true love
Their journey soared like wings of a dove
                    06/12/2021

Written for Write A “Trionet” For Me Poetry Contest
Sponsored by L Milton Hankins

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Sara Kendrick November 9, 2021 at 4:01 AM I enjoyed reading your contest entry. Yes, the church does become a place of love occasionally when that wedding takes place. I don't know how long the love last but it is there at that moment. I remember one wedding I went to years and years ago. The couple argued before the wedding. I was just a child and I thought will this marriage last. It did not. Sara

Eve Roper July 22, 2021 at 8:45 PM Weddings are always beautiful , good luck in the contest. Soup mail. Hugs Eve

Alexis Y. June 14, 2021 at 6:10 PM WoW! Evelyn, This is a lovely entry for the contest. I could just picture the beautiful bride and her groom saying their vows in the church. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis Evelyn Swartz June 14, 2021 at 11:59 PM Thank you for the beautiful comment