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Mesmerized

Mesmerized by the Monarch's flight Flutter and swirling in the air It danced around me so light WIth happiness in its flare it landed close to me a lot Circling around me today Taking rests in each peaceful spot I watched it lift me on its way My head turned with each move made Such celebration to see Not a reason to be afraid Mesmerized by serenity My friend went along it's journey Leaving me standing in its wake Altered by swirling memory With nothing left at stake Heidi Sands 7/26/22

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Date: 7/28/2022 10:41:00 AM
My favorite line is memorized by serenity. That poem was epic
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/28/2022 10:42:00 AM
Thank you very much. I appreciate your kind feedback. :)
Date: 7/28/2022 6:10:00 AM
So sweet and tender Heidi. You were blessed by this friend's flight. :) Linda
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/28/2022 6:21:00 AM
Thank you Linda. Yes, I was blessed to watch such a beautiful butterfly flight. I hope you have a nice day.
Date: 7/27/2022 6:36:00 PM
Nothing like the flight (and landings) of monarch butterflies -- so aptly named!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/27/2022 7:07:00 PM
Yes. Nice to watch them. Thank you :)
Date: 7/26/2022 6:56:00 PM
A beautiful creature, a wonderous poet.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/27/2022 3:15:00 AM
Thank you so much Harry :)
Date: 7/26/2022 3:27:00 PM
A lovely poem reveling in Monarch's flight, Heidi. Enjoyed the waltzing emotions you convey--they really are a joy to watch.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/27/2022 3:15:00 AM
Thank you very much Vijay :)

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