Heidi Sands Poet Rhyme

Mesmerized

Mesmerized by the Monarch's flight
Flutter and swirling in the air
It danced around me so light
WIth happiness in its flare

it landed close to me a lot
Circling around me today
Taking rests in each peaceful spot
I watched it lift me on its way

My head turned with each move made
Such celebration to see
Not a reason to be afraid 
Mesmerized by serenity

My friend went along it's journey
Leaving me standing in its wake
Altered by swirling memory
With nothing left at stake

Heidi Sands

7/26/22

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Miranda Hawley July 28, 2022 at 10:41 AM My favorite line is memorized by serenity. That poem was epic Heidi Sands July 28, 2022 at 10:42 AM Thank you very much. I appreciate your kind feedback. :)

Linda Alice Fowler July 28, 2022 at 6:10 AM So sweet and tender Heidi. You were blessed by this friend's flight. :) Linda Heidi Sands July 28, 2022 at 6:21 AM Thank you Linda. Yes, I was blessed to watch such a beautiful butterfly flight. I hope you have a nice day.

Gershon Wolf July 27, 2022 at 6:36 PM Nothing like the flight (and landings) of monarch butterflies -- so aptly named! Heidi Sands July 27, 2022 at 7:07 PM Yes. Nice to watch them. Thank you :)

Harry Horsman July 26, 2022 at 6:56 PM A beautiful creature, a wonderous poet. Heidi Sands July 27, 2022 at 3:15 AM Thank you so much Harry :)

Vijay Pandit July 26, 2022 at 3:27 PM A lovely poem reveling in Monarch's flight, Heidi. Enjoyed the waltzing emotions you convey--they really are a joy to watch. Heidi Sands July 27, 2022 at 3:15 AM Thank you very much Vijay :)