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Mesmerized

Mesmerized In the mirror image of yourself as far and near do I take myself clear as I have a tear for you. Reach out toward the moon lit stars while I repair the stars afar, Reach the top stair as I am here, When I awake I will do a double take for heavens sake. I will hear the sweetest sound playing in the court yard of your heart, As I stand here with the curves of a woman But only the melody of a sweet sounding guitar. Not a care in this world, I choose to share my words of wisdom within this mirror, I am aware as Im walking on air, Can you see How I am Mesmerized through the sound in the air holding my woman of curves.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/3/2009 10:58:00 AM
dreamy poem, love it! glad you were able to display your work just the way you want to! I do too! love your poetry, Jim
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Date: 3/11/2009 2:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Cheryl. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/11/2009 10:36:00 AM
Congrats Cheryl on "mesmerized" being featured. Vince
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Date: 3/10/2009 3:25:00 PM
congrats on this wonderful poem being featured this week!...MJ*
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Date: 3/9/2009 5:45:00 PM
Interesting perspective in this poem. The title adds a bit of mystery. Congratulations on being featured this week. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 3/9/2009 1:51:00 PM
Congratulations on this wondeerful piece being featrured this week! Thank you for your thoughtful comment! Love, Robin
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Date: 3/9/2009 11:04:00 AM
Cheryl - Congratulations on your poem being featured this week! Very well deserved. Peace always, John
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Date: 3/9/2009 6:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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Date: 3/8/2009 9:51:00 PM
Cheryl - I loved this poem - very well written - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 2/28/2009 5:25:00 AM
The love was his guitar thats why the curves of a woman
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Date: 2/28/2009 3:31:00 AM
Welcome Cheryl. Deep reflection which I enjoyed but parts of it are a mystery to me. I love the last stanza. Randy
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