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Mesmerized

"Mesmerized"
I am all of the colours in your mind we dance our fresh canvas flirtatiously brushstrokes caressing inquisitively flowing we blend together effortlessly Mesmerized You are all of the colours reflecting in my eyes Double Jeopardy a cool seduction hypnotized (LadyLabyrinth / 2020)
Ryuichi Sakamoto - Amore (Playing The Orchestra 2013) https://youtu.be/dMeDgrD4yXQ

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Date: 8/10/2020 7:56:00 AM
*From poet's pen, love's infinite colors may flow. *Even when, it inks verse of darkness down below. *And poet's heart, gifts to others, romantic light. *Be still gasping breath, as Venus dares show her might. *As depths of love, 'a la Romeo and Juliet. *There her favored lovers rejoice tete-a-tete... Inspired by your wonderful piece my friend... A fav...
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Robert Lindley
Date: 8/10/2020 8:02:00 PM
AHH, madness- tempest in the aching soul A candle of flaming agonies aloft Humanity's dark symphonies, life's tolls Sins, evil desires- born far, far too oft..... In youth I thought to be a vagabond, trekking about without a worldly care then reality its ugly head bellowed out. I have you firmly in my grasp as you stepped into my snare..... And so it tis.... Chasing ravishing beauty, ladies that this heart enslaved. I forsake honor, fortitude and duty- sought more than my fair share... Only to discover greed has its blades and cuts wickedly deep. I lived as a wild crazy-horse rider and my many secrets do I now keep....
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/10/2020 3:35:00 PM
she probably enjoys you waking up at 2/3 am in the morning, as I'm sure you cannot get back to sleep. lol - It has become apparent to me that the Consomme is a chunky stockpot full of stewed madness - you are in 'esteemed' company. ;) one could complete their Doctorate in Psychology amongst these pages.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 8/10/2020 3:22:00 PM
Yes, those are the verses that just came to me in a mad rush. Had to bang it down quick before I lost it. Sad thing is if I do not stop and write when that happens to me- I lose it-usually all of it. Even more so when I wake from dreaming and I have receive verses in my sleep. Sometimes my wife thinks I am crazy with my jumping up 2/3 am to jot down verses! If you think it well, then perhaps I need to complete it? God bless...
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/10/2020 2:50:00 PM
did you write that on the run? :) thanks Lindley.
Date: 8/9/2020 1:52:00 PM
https://youtu.be/zx_dTSPzXlk
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Date: 8/9/2020 1:48:00 PM
Body Electric.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/9/2020 1:49:00 PM
Whitman/Del Rey.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/9/2020 1:48:00 PM
https://youtu.be/thSPRS4oVp4
Date: 8/9/2020 5:47:00 AM
Love blends all the separate colours into one beautiful vision
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/9/2020 1:32:00 PM
https://allpoetry.com/poem/8501097-Arrival-by-William-Carlos-Williams
Date: 8/9/2020 5:35:00 AM
Voluptuous Bullets ;)
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TS Poetry
Date: 8/9/2020 5:47:00 AM
xx
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/9/2020 5:35:00 AM
https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/voluptuous_bullets_1215553