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As I watered hanging flowers in garden’s space, A tiger swallowtail landed in front of my face My mind drifted off to a far away place As I was mesmerized, by its fluttering grace Heidi Sands 5/25/18

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Elaine George

Date: 5/29/2018 2:32:00 PM

Simply beautiful, Heidi...like the butterfly itself. Elaine

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/29/2018 3:14:00 PM

Thank you Elaine :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/25/2018 2:06:00 PM

Simply beautiful!

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/25/2018 2:07:00 PM

Thank you Vijay :)

Joseph May

Date: 5/25/2018 10:53:00 AM

Beautiful poem Heidi

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/25/2018 10:57:00 AM

Thank you Joseph. It was beautiful to see :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 5/25/2018 10:28:00 AM

Lovely Heidi, nicely written, so gentle...

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/25/2018 10:46:00 AM

Thank you Charlie. I appreciate your comment. It is nice to see you :)