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Mesmerize

Your voice, like a river rippling, waves of goose bumps, awaken my inner spirit, fill me with delight. Your gaze, magnetic, blue moonlight bright, clear as the evening night, gently captures my inner light. Your heart, speaks softly, soulfully, whispering faithfully, sometimes silently, but never in spite. Your touch, captivating, tranquil, slight, caressing me slowly, surrounding me, with all of your might. Your smile, brilliant, bright, tantalizing, on a steamy summer night, summoning me gently, to be your wife. Copyright, Heather Mirassou

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/24/2010 4:44:00 PM
Well now Heather, Can't get much more poetic than that! enjoyed.-Robert
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Date: 4/18/2010 1:39:00 PM
Thankxxx Heather for your special comment on my poetry today.. I enjoyed reading your creative write also and hope u will enter my current contest "Flower Power" on the contests page..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 4/18/2010 10:35:00 AM
Nice use of imagery to share your thoughts. You have me smiline with your words. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen
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Date: 4/11/2010 7:08:00 PM
Heather~ What an outstanding romantic beautiful piece this is wow I love it! Laura :)
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Date: 4/11/2010 4:35:00 PM
Lovely dreamy piece of passion and desire >> James
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