Merry Hismas

This christmas you’ll know how great I am
Ya I’m the man. 
You want diamonds and a car? I’ll do better by far!
Porsche extravagance and a solitaire 
brighter than the North Star.

The present I want to unwrap is you 
laying seductively under my wife’s tree
My christmas colour is pink mystery
together we joyfully can rewrite history
cause baby cakes you do things to me
that make me not care 
about her misery
This  christmas is hismas
so let’s fill it with ecstasy 

As we laid there intertwined
I felt shock waves
going through my mind
I couldn’t  see or feel you, I’d gone sense blind!
In the darkness 
my blissfulness unravelEd
“PLEASE let me hit Rewind”
But it was just liquid black I could find
They came and removed
my wrinkled soul
and l was forced to leave you behind

Christmas morning
I was placed into a pretty box of pine
Family and friends didn’t show, not a sign
You who I thought was mine
drove your new Porsche 
down Rodeo Drive
Later some caviar and wine
No worries you felt better than fine
After all you have plenty of rich fellows 
waiting in line.

“Happy Birthday to You
Happy Birthday to you.”
Across the Abyss
I watch the Angels celebrate  Christmas
as on my chest I pound my fists
Why wasn’t Jesus there on my Christmas list?
My knee is bowed, I now confess
but no one can get me out of my mess
The more I lusted for turned out to be less
Now my soul is burning and I can find no rest
I felt powerful like a god 
believing that was why I was blessed
By trusting in myself 
I failed the ultimate test.

 
For Bobbie Burns, “Beyond The Niceties of Christmas Poetry Contest”.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Raven Avatar
April 18, 2020 at 8:14 AM
As always Richard, I love the creativity in your work. You always paint such strong images in the mind. You use the free-verse form to its full extent. I love the content, Richard. Have a wonderful Saturday. Blessings....Mike.
Lamoureux Avatar
April 18, 2020 at 8:18 AM
Thanks Mike, I hope your Saturday is also wonderful.
Aurora Avatar
January 9, 2020 at 5:16 PM
Love the darkness surrounding this Christmas tale. Unfortunately, Christmas is now a commodity. A lot of people only care about "The stuff". Very intriguing poem. Love the bursts of monorhyme.
Proxenos Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 9:31 AM
I realized the significance of giving expensive presents only recently, what are we trying to prove, life is love and love is life and we have the power through Him to spread this thought! Wonderful poem my friend, Blessings, Jennifer.
Lamoureux Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 10:01 AM
Thanks Jennifer. Blessings and hugs back to you.
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January 4, 2020 at 9:07 AM
Creative write... that's the beauty of poetry. We can write about things that are far removed from our lives. I'm in Germany at the moment. I just popped in to PS because FJ visited me and I needed to respond to her. She's so dear to my heart. I'll be back when I'm back in Lebanon. Blessings...
Chiri Avatar
January 3, 2020 at 10:26 PM
A little (ok a lot) ooh la la! Rick really enjoyed this read!;)
Lamoureux Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 10:00 AM
Thanks Brenda. Hugs Rick.
Dietrich Avatar
January 2, 2020 at 8:57 PM
wow, now THAT was very different and very dark. So creative, clever man!!
Lamoureux Avatar
January 3, 2020 at 9:25 AM
Thanks Andrea. ;0)
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January 2, 2020 at 3:33 AM
Painful it is when we realise how little we know about divinity's will dearest, Richard. Excellent writing my friend. Happy New Year!
Lamoureux Avatar
January 3, 2020 at 9:31 AM
Thanks a Demetrios.
Roper Avatar
January 1, 2020 at 9:11 PM
Nicely done, Richard, your beautiful wife is worth all. Happy New Years
Lamoureux Avatar
January 3, 2020 at 9:31 AM
Thanks Eve. Blessings Rick.
Krutsinger Avatar
December 31, 2019 at 11:38 PM
When you said Hismas, you meant it! I was thinking "where is this going?" Well done, indeed. A little lesson in selfishness!
Lamoureux Avatar
January 1, 2020 at 10:00 AM
Thanks Caren. ;0)
Delaney Avatar
December 31, 2019 at 8:56 PM
Such a wonderful flow to this, Rich: You really gave meaning to naughty OR nice. It can be nice to be naughty but in the long run I guess it’s right to be nice. Should be a top placer. Happy New Year in 2020. Thanks for your visits. SuZ
Lamoureux Avatar
January 1, 2020 at 10:00 AM
My pleasure.
Y. Avatar
December 31, 2019 at 6:35 PM
WoW! Richard, I enjoyed everything about this piece. The loving gestures and the playful tone and vibe. Well done. Happy New Year my friend:-) Alexis
Lamoureux Avatar
December 31, 2019 at 8:07 PM
Thanks Alexis. I hope you have a fun night planned. Happy 2020.
Labyrinth Avatar
December 31, 2019 at 8:41 AM
...'abyss'. Your words, "Across the Abbys" needs correcting. You probably like being corrected. Lamoureux, here we go....seriously, do you think this is the real shizz? Who gives a rat's arse anymore about integrity when survival is at stake? Truth is a bitch sometimes. Labyrinth. ;) xx
Lamoureux Avatar
December 31, 2019 at 9:23 AM
Only when my teacher is wearing stilettos and leather. Fortunately I’ve been home schooled for 26 years. After years of training I am the Love Doctor. ;0)
Poetry Avatar
December 31, 2019 at 6:25 AM
Some believe it's all about material things Rick...great poem
Lamoureux Avatar
December 31, 2019 at 8:16 AM
Thanks TS.
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December 31, 2019 at 12:02 AM
I was sat in my cellar, and read Poetry, this one of Hismas took my eye, had to read it thrice, my soul on rewind,and then again rewind, well worth the time..love your poetry mate, God sent, or from the bowers. Happy New Year
Lamoureux Avatar
December 31, 2019 at 9:24 AM
Thanks Harry. A great comment.
Messina Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 10:43 PM
This is GREAT, Rick. For a minute I almost wished I were your wife.. Then, as I read on my thoughts changed (lol) Awesome write brother! Best wishes for a win. ( This should rank high) Hope you have a Healthy & Happy New Year! Charlie
Lamoureux Avatar
December 31, 2019 at 9:26 AM
Ha ha, thanks for the Chuckle Charles.
Connelly Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 6:30 PM
Oh WOW bravo Richard. This I truly loved. It also made me think that the best stocking stuffers was and is a prostetic leg. Go figure Richard. Thank you so much.
Lamoureux Avatar
December 31, 2019 at 9:26 AM
? How did it make you think that? :0)
Romios Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 2:07 PM
Bravo Richard! A FAV. This is one of the most extraornary poems I have read since being here. Double wows on this Panagiota xx Happy New Year
Lamoureux Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 2:33 PM
You are sweet Panagiota, the contest inspired me.
Adams Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 12:12 PM
wow....quite a powerful verse Rick...started out so playful and seductive and ended on a sadder note... enjoyed the read...your imagination always creates a wonderful story to enjoy :) hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 12:15 PM
Thanks Sandra. Hugs Rick.
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