Me.R.Man

Lost, Found, and Claimed -- Reborn from the seas of entropy,
Its salt profound with the alteration of mass and energy, 
Bringing forth a new creation through the regenesis of "Me."

Its voice had beckoned so I've prudently listened
As it spoke of salvation and escape from the sin-ridden --
A land of so-called life, the incontinent libertine Eden.

 ‘Twas today, I’ve laid to drown but only to discover
New gills fashioned me for a life under troubled waters,
And below were fins for me to flee and move on faster.

In my new body I glide through the vastness of space,
Like a bird in flight, leaving Land without trace…
I swim farther away and further more into grace.
 
My abode now the ephemeral of sharks and sunken ships
In these troubled waters I dance until death’s final kiss,
Happy to have lived a merman, than a man of earthly bliss.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 12/23/2009 3:29:00 AM
Congratulations on being a first round survivor Cris and the best to you in the finals. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/21/2009 9:32:00 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/20/2009 1:55:00 PM
Congratulations on moving to the next round with this great poem, Cris! Wishing you joy and happiness in the New Year, love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/20/2009 11:46:00 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
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Date: 11/20/2009 7:06:00 AM
Congrats on feature poem this week!
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Date: 11/16/2009 9:17:00 PM
Congratulations on being featured this week. Love, Iolanda
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Date: 11/16/2009 11:35:00 AM
Congrats on your feature poem this week! LOve Light Patty
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Date: 11/16/2009 10:38:00 AM
Many congratulations on your poem being featured this week >> James
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Date: 11/16/2009 5:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/15/2009 6:52:00 PM
Interesting perspective. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you ongoing success. Karen
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Date: 8/4/2009 5:59:00 AM
Good Morning Cris. I enjoyed reading your wonderful poem this morning. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/3/2009 10:55:00 AM
Very impressive writing. Keep writing. Sara
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