Notes About The Poem

Mermaid Playfriends

contagious joyful giggles
whimsical frivolity
frolicking in a fun
aquamarine playpark

mermaids in the
twilight of their youth



AP: 2nd place 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Gilmour Avatar
September 30, 2019 at 3:19 PM
What a glorious picture you have painted Line, I love the idea of mermaids in the twilight of their youth, joyfully giggling! Congrats on your very well deserved win. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Gauthier Avatar
September 30, 2019 at 4:39 PM
Thank you so much, Ann. Most appreciated.
Canerdy Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 8:03 PM
CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win, Line! Janice
Gauthier Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 8:17 PM
Thank you so much, Janice. Most appreciated.
Blodgett Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 4:06 PM
Line this poem is a true delight that makes one giggle along. Lonna
Gauthier Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 7:44 PM
Thank you so much, Lonna. Most appreciated.
Mcguire Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 3:49 PM
Without a care in the world
Gauthier Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 7:45 PM
LOL just having fun with my fellow mermaids.
Wolf Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 3:03 PM
Caren had to love this one. Penned with a feathery touch! Congrats on your win in the contest, Line! :) gw
Gauthier Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 7:47 PM
Thank you so much for your much appreciated visit and compliment, Gershon.
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 2:45 PM
This is precious Line. I loved it! Congratulations on your deserving Second Placement! : ) xxoo
Gauthier Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 2:58 PM
Thanks, Connie. Most appreciated.
La France Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 12:06 PM
Line sweet poem and congratulations on your win in the contest!
Gauthier Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 2:58 PM
Thanks, Constance. Most appreciated.
Andresen Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 11:42 AM
- Lovely poem Line, congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gauthier Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 2:58 PM
Thanks, Sunshine. Most appreciated.
Lamoureux Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 10:50 AM
This is sweet? Congrats on your win.
Gauthier Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 11:36 AM
Thanks, Richard. Much appreciated.
Mcintosh Avatar
September 28, 2019 at 11:57 PM
Best wishes for a win... This seems like something Caren will love. Blessings
Gauthier Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 11:37 AM
Thanks, Regina. Much appreciated.
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