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Mermaid of All Radiance

Her golden locks flow with their curls Down to the arch of her golden back Her eyes send a seductive tale to you A emerald green fish-tail dances A goddess of the sea A mistress of a legend many would tell Like the pirate that finds his treasure The treasure chest unlocked The deepness of the kingdom she calls home She can love you or drown you As some are taken to their doom with no rescue Some just dont know what they are doing The fishermen have heard her song as they wait their catch A voice of an angel that could take you to all eternity Her beauty takes hold of your senses a moment of tease Through the magical tune of the mermaids eyes oh so divine Like the taste of grapevines a allurement of the mind Storys have been told, fairytales have sent enchantment A scene has been painted The waters are their grounding surround They watch as the scarlet sun reflects the oceans wave The ruby red of sunset lays upon them As night falls the stars protect them A mermaid in all her splendor ,as she now swims with all radiance.....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/9/2010 7:35:00 AM
fabulous!
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Date: 7/6/2010 2:00:00 PM
Top write about the mermaid Sarah, your words painted them splendidly >> James
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Date: 7/4/2010 1:52:00 PM
Very descriptive of this great mermaid..That elusive and seductive character..Sara
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Date: 7/4/2010 1:28:00 PM
This is lovely, Sarah!! I hope you entered it in one of the contests....and didn't miss. This would fit Free Verse contest, or fantasy, even perhaps the angel contest!! I enjoyed this!! ...and thank you by the way, for your kind comment on mine :) Love, Carrie
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Date: 7/4/2010 1:16:00 PM
So lovely Sarah and hope u got a chance to enter it in Joe's free verse contest which has closed now.. an enjoyable piece.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii.. AlohA...
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