Mermaid Most Fair

If I could be a fanciful being, I think I would be,
a mermaid, that lived among the creatures in the sea.

To have flowing red hair, that everyone could spy,
when I was out and about, swimming by.

My tail, the long fish-like part of me,
an iridescent, aqua blue, color of the sea.

I would wear jewels from treasures buried deep.
Upon wrecked ships, lying forever in sleep.

I would swim swiftly beside the whales,
making sure to stay far from their tails.

I would aid all sealife that needed me.
To help a sailor, who may be lost at sea.

If I would get weary, I would grab a fin,
of a playful, friendly dolphin to pull me in.

I would worry about fishing nets I would find,
warning all my ocean friends to keep in mind.

To be known in "Atlantis", if it is really there.
As a special friend, who was a mermaid most fair.

Why would I want this fantasy to be?
So I could live my life in the beautiful sea.

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Date: 2/22/2019 10:16:00 PM
I enjoyed the fantasy laced creativity. It appealed to me and the little girl still within. A JOY ... CayCay
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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 2/22/2019 10:26:00 PM
I am glad the little girl still within remembers the joy of fantasy. Sometimes we do forget. Thank you, Cay Cay
Date: 2/21/2019 9:47:00 PM
Reminds me of that song, "Under The Sea" in The Littlest Mermaid. Isn't imagination a wonderful thing? A really fun read, Sandra:)
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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 2/22/2019 10:23:00 PM
So glad that you enjoyed it, Daniel. Thank you, for your kind comment.
Date: 2/21/2019 1:06:00 PM
Ah, living your fantasy as a siren in the deep blue sea. Nothing better, Sandra!
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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 2/21/2019 1:38:00 PM
Wouldn't it be beaufiful? Thank you, Caren
Date: 2/21/2019 12:30:00 PM
Lovely, Sandra. Mermaids are one of my ultimate favorite topics. Well done.
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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 2/21/2019 1:26:00 PM
Thank you ,Line for your lovely comment. Nice to know the topic is a favorite of yours. Thank you also for the heads up! Did a check, did the same.
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