Kim Van Breda Poet Free verse

Merits of Nail Varnish

distinctive dates always
involve
meticulous vital keys
important
detailed flawlessness
considered
attires vigilant choice
perfected
essential final selection
striking
the hands will reveal 
red
passion portrayed sharply
merits
seduction by means of
nail varnish


© September 2013—Kim van Breda

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Ralph Mason September 11, 2013 at 8:45 AM I like your poem. Very imaginative. Warm toughts, Ralph

Andrea Dietrich September 10, 2013 at 4:46 PM Love the build up to the ending about the nail polish. Red would be a great color

Richard Lamoureux September 9, 2013 at 8:47 AM A Drake Damn is a mark of quality. Well done Kim! Kim Van Breda September 9, 2013 at 12:21 PM Really?? I am thus honored...in fact honored to receive all you talented people and your feedback :)

Poet Tacito September 9, 2013 at 8:03 AM The imperfect perfections. Damn, nice job with this! Kim Van Breda September 9, 2013 at 12:22 PM Thanks Drake.. off center topic choice with this one-- was feeling bored... so appreciate the feedback.

Anne-Lise Andresen September 9, 2013 at 7:30 AM - A good image .... well done, Kim... oxox // Anne-Lise :) Kim Van Breda September 9, 2013 at 12:24 PM Thanks Anne Lise... feedback from you is always valued. I know you understand this poem from a female perspective too :)