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Merchant Ship

A swallow swoops for flitting flies While Johnny rubs exhausted eyes (As morning clasps the rising sun) Confirming Captain’s day’s begun: Slow streams emerge from melting snows - The Merchant Ship’s in stark repose... As Johnny frets with tingling tongue A Vulture fleeces fields far-flung (Beneath a bleeding sun above), And Captain culls the dead with love: Yes, while the silent water flows, The Merchant Ship just gulps and grows... A serpent weaves amongst the weeds As Johnny dares audacious deeds (When evening drains the dying day) To stop the Captain, come what may: And while the raging rivers grow The Merchant Ship rocks to and fro... An owl, a’ branch, has teacup eyes That glimmer dark as Johnny dies (Now sown inside the future’s womb) When flushing Captain to his doom: Trapped in titanic undertow The Merchant Ship’s swept down below... A fledgling bird sprays morning dew As Johnny Junior’s born anew (He’s baptised in the dawn ablaze) To rectify the former days: Raw rills arise from melting snow And virgin rivers start to flow...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/24/2012 2:12:00 PM
I love the meter, rhyme, and flow of this beautiful poem. Great job.
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Date: 8/28/2012 12:44:00 AM
awesome write ,, I was playing Captain Jack on board game about a week ago ;}
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Date: 8/26/2012 10:45:00 AM
Terry - another brilliant one. I loved reading the parentheses together, a poem within a poem. love, Kathy
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Date: 8/22/2012 4:01:00 PM
it really flows this poetry of yours... love it mate.... the styx triggered a memory with me so the words flow ...so i type on the puter...
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Date: 8/22/2012 7:12:00 AM
excellent tale, i really enjoyed this nice piece thank you for sharing
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Date: 8/21/2012 4:44:00 PM
Fantastic tale you have told here, Terry...the meter and rhythm flow with ease...Great job! - Tim
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Date: 8/21/2012 9:22:00 AM
Thank you Terry for this beautifully written story,I have enjoyed every word in it,and thank you for stopping by,Ivy
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Date: 8/19/2012 5:47:00 AM
A captivating ballad, Terry! The story and images flow perfectly with the rhythm here. Enthalled by this superior write. Best wishes, Mikki
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Date: 8/16/2012 4:46:00 PM
the rhythm and rhyme of this poem are so perfect it was an absolute pleasure to read! thank you for a brilliantly written tale!
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Date: 8/16/2012 7:13:00 AM
love the Title here also, Terry, as this wonderful poem, flows along with such rhythmic fervour,, those last two lines in the last stanza, to me are classics..
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Date: 8/16/2012 6:58:00 AM
Very captivating ballad.
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Date: 8/16/2012 6:24:00 AM
Terry, you have written a golden gem - very, very good poem - Thank you for sharing this. - oxox // Anne-Lise (+10)
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Date: 8/16/2012 5:27:00 AM
Where do you get it all from, I'll have a drop if whatever it is , another wonderful write dear boy xx
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Date: 8/16/2012 2:51:00 AM
Terry, I love this , but it's more like a ballad, still love it though...David
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