Mentally Perturbed


Children shot down in a school again
It’s the collateral cost of freedom I’m told,
by a labeled unstable son-of-a-gun kin

He had “wild horses roaming free” in his head,
that’s what the county doctors said
As the grief-stricken soul of a community bled

His eighteenth birthday gift was a death wish:
Killing innocent kids was at the top of the list
An unpredictable behavior everybody missed

The government officials declare,
the young man was “emotionally disturbed”
But bullets don’t grey matter care

Forensic fingers paint the crime scene “evil red,”
as automatic revulsion smears their semi-stoic conscience
Cold bloody memories, they just can’t ever shed

And the true metal believers idol-ly say,
the unhinged shooter was “mentally perturbed”
Seems bullets get asylum alter ricochet


05-28-22
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Manassian Avatar
July 19, 2024 at 9:41 PM
Sad beyond words. It's unbelievable. When something like this happened in New Zealand, Arden has gun control measures in place almost immediately after. Bullets don't grey matter care... just an example of the superb word choice in this piece. God bless you
Croft Avatar
May 2, 2024 at 11:04 PM
Hope you are doing well. I don't understand this world anymore. Maybe I'm glad I don't, so I won't see it coming.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 29, 2024 at 6:30 AM
Where you left off and have not written since 2022… Hope all is well! You write with passion… Forensic fingers paint the crime scene “evil red..”
Mac Donald Avatar
October 13, 2023 at 10:37 AM
Hi Freddie! These horrifying incidents are endlessly repeated by hordes of mentally disturbed Copycat shooters! Is *Herds of wild horses galloping inside their heads* justification for a more lenient sentence? Well done Freddie!
Lamoureux Avatar
October 5, 2023 at 6:22 AM
I’ll never understand the approach or lack of gun control in the USA. I totally appreciate the emotions you convey here Freddie. As always your words are potent.
Sands Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 9:12 AM
How are you Freddie?
Stark Avatar
August 18, 2023 at 3:45 AM
Bang Bang Knocking on my door "Do you have a dollar? Would you like to fund a war? What's your carbon footprint and could you be doing more?" I tried saving the world but then I got bored. Lines similar to your muse
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