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Mentally Perturbed

Children shot down in a school again It’s the collateral cost of freedom I’m told, by a labeled unstable son-of-a-gun kin He had “wild horses roaming free” in his head, that’s what the county doctors said As the grief-stricken soul of a community bled His eighteenth birthday gift was a death wish: Killing innocent kids was at the top of the list An unpredictable behavior everybody missed The government officials declare, the young man was “emotionally disturbed” But bullets don’t grey matter care Forensic fingers paint the crime scene “evil red,” as automatic revulsion smears their semi-stoic conscience Cold bloody memories, they just can’t ever shed And the true metal believers idol-ly say, the unhinged shooter was “mentally perturbed” Seems bullets get asylum alter ricochet 05-28-22

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Date: 2/29/2024 6:30:00 AM
Where you left off and have not written since 2022… Hope all is well! You write with passion… Forensic fingers paint the crime scene “evil red..”
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Date: 10/13/2023 10:37:00 AM
Hi Freddie! These horrifying incidents are endlessly repeated by hordes of mentally disturbed Copycat shooters! Is *Herds of wild horses galloping inside their heads* justification for a more lenient sentence? Well done Freddie!
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Date: 10/5/2023 6:22:00 AM
I’ll never understand the approach or lack of gun control in the USA. I totally appreciate the emotions you convey here Freddie. As always your words are potent.
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Date: 8/26/2023 9:12:00 AM
How are you Freddie?
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Date: 8/18/2023 3:45:00 AM
Bang Bang Knocking on my door "Do you have a dollar? Would you like to fund a war? What's your carbon footprint and could you be doing more?" I tried saving the world but then I got bored. Lines similar to your muse
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Date: 7/18/2023 6:26:00 PM
Coo coo cachoo Freddy Robinson, Jesus loves you more than you will know, whoa whoa whoa... Yes, Satan's world is full of ironies and hypocrisies
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