Mental Pollution

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Some people are like a building,seemingly stable. But the enviroment of human interaction can eat away at the foundation,supporting self worth. We as friends inspect,by our interactions. We only see the surface,and suddenly the structuire collapses. From what? We will never know.

A feeling creates a word. Tired A feeling creates a word. Lost A feeling creates a word. Frustration A feeling creates a word. Dizzy A feeling creates a word. Grasping A feeling creates a word. Fear A feeling creates a word. Unstable A feeling creates a word. Worthless A feeling creates a word. Awkward A feeling creates a word. Alone A feeling creates a word. Garbage A feeling creates a word. Depressed A feeling creates a word. Useless A feeling creates a word. Solution A feeling creates a word. Suicide No feeling creates a word. Peace

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Karen Edwards-Gregory

Date: 10/1/2017 9:14:00 PM

Interesting and powerful...

Kieran Pavlick
Date: 10/2/2017 3:12:00 PM

Thank You. I am told by many, I talk too much. So I try to condense ideas into a work people might read. I wrote a Novel, showed it to an Agent, and she said it wasn't Fat Enough. Not enough words. But, there are short stories, novellas and so on. I wonder if the more words, equals more pages, lets it be priced higher, and everyone gets more money? I am working on another project, and when done, I will look at self-publishing my "Skinny," Novel.