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The alarm blasts me awake
From a fitful night’s sleep,
Another day of bills to pay
And promises to keep.
Dropping Patanol in my eyes 
As I attempt to slowly rise,
Feeling disparate deja vus 
As my morning coffee brews.

And I make a mental note
To try and get more sleep
Then just as quickly forget
As I leave the room to eat.


Sitting at the breakfast table 
Where I find that I am able,
To spend a few, quick minutes,
And rummage through the obits.
Is there someone I know? 
And then right before I go,
Count how many are my age 
Before I put down the page.

And I make a mental note 
To eat less and workout more
Then just as quickly forget
As I rush out the door.


I arrive at my job.
Turn my office doorknob, 
Begin my daily routine
Taking breaks in between. 
And my boss storms in mad
Says “You did something bad!”

And I make a mental note
To do better next time
Then just as quickly forget
When I leave at closing time.


Returning home feeling famished
I notice some damage
To the roof and the doors
And the siding and floors.
And the gutters are hanging
And the shutters are banging.

And I make a mental note
To make time for repairs.
Then just as quickly forget
As I climb the porch stairs.


I finally make it inside
And after eating decide
To relax in the den
Before my favorite show begins
Then I notice God’s Word
On the table undisturbed.

And I make a mental note 
To take time to read God’s Word. . .

Hey, wait!  I can do this now!

So, I open up God’s Word
“faith follows the thing heard”
And I understand the hope
That allows us all to cope

And I make a mental note
To read, meditate and pray.
The Holy Bible gives us courage
So we can face another day!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/16/2021 4:48:00 AM
Fantastic, been quickly forgetting for years and procrastinate too. You are a true story teller!
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Mark Toney
Date: 2/26/2021 9:39:00 AM
Thank you, Barbara! Life goes on ...

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