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Men At War

Men at war. Guns at ourselves. Grave stones- Yards of our bones. Morals calling out- Ears are deaf. Morals- Must be found. It's there- Ray of hope. Burst of love. Brothers we must be. Though our nature brings us pain- Good, Can shine its way in.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 9/21/2018 7:27:00 PM
wonderful, David. Congrats in the contest.
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Date: 9/21/2018 6:31:00 PM
many congrats on your win David:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/21/2018 4:20:00 PM
David, congratulations on your win and your positive perspective on human nature. A ray of hope for a brotherhood of man! ~Mark
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Date: 9/21/2018 4:03:00 PM
Thanks for participating in my contest, David! Great poem with vivid imagery! Congratulations on your fine win!
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