Men and Many More
Men and Many More
In response to "Ready To Burst" by Cecilia MacFarlane.
Why would each of us rather walk away
When we should think about trying to stay
But sometimes being faithful to very end
Maybe into ecstasy might not ever send.
What was it exactly that you expected?
Did you sort out cards before being selected?
Or he probably was first one to come along
And consisting singing the same old song.
How did you tolerate him this long anyway
Making you mad causing feelings to display
Sure seems like he is trying to be cool
While you are sitting on the counselor's stool.
This great guy has used you in every way
So what more remains or is left to say
Except I'm going to beach I do adore
Where there will be men and many more.
James Thomas Horn, Retired Veteran
Need a category called Suggestion.
Copyright © James Horn | Year Posted 2015
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