Men

Men Smell fear They crave sex They miss their moms They live long enough. Long enough for women folk. They compete to always win. They command respect at all times. They all never ask for directions. They all mostly think about erections.

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Alan Reed

Date: 6/9/2010 1:48:00 PM

You have captured the true tiger in a man. I know. :-)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2010 10:30:00 AM

Yes I agree with Shirley, are you to related I enjoyed the whole men and the bottom just blew up a smile and a chuckle. Did not see that one comming, nice nice,..p..d

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/9/2010 5:47:00 AM

Good luck with this one ...I had a chuckle..Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/9/2010 12:25:00 AM

A very nice etheree. Good luck in the contest

Nicole King

Date: 6/8/2010 11:31:00 PM

...i can understand feeling this, but it isn't really true...i mean unless you have some truely wretched experiences with them, there are those who are worth it. I like the write the flow but not the idea