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Memory Loss

Memory Loss Motivated by thought, realised mistreated actions. I owe it to myself, to know I am enough. Who do you think you are, to make me doubt my fire that burns to bright for you to desire. How strong can you then be, if you can't handle me? So I have a memory loss of you and me a stranger that ones walked passed me.

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Carole Duet

Date: 8/6/2016 4:25:00 AM

Very good .......congrats!

Harmony Raymond

Date: 8/2/2016 1:45:00 PM

Your poem is so beautiful and pertains to such a clear-cut theme.

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 8/2/2016 7:51:00 AM

Your poem pulsates with emotions that just can't go away.... Congrats Alicha, for having your piece featured in the Poetry Soup homepage!! ;-)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/16/2016 12:16:00 AM

Alicha, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Alicha Du Plooy
Date: 7/16/2016 7:25:00 PM

I appreciate it thank you xxx:-)

Skat A

Date: 7/15/2016 2:12:00 PM

Alicha,, Welcome to poetry soup, after reading this I feel as if you are an Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT*

Alicha Du Plooy
Date: 7/15/2016 3:51:00 PM

Thank you for your comment I appreciate it xxx