Memory

Hey. How's it going, with your life?
I know mine just keeps on falling apart.
What do I see? Can it be?! Oh, wait who are you again?
My memory has faded away. 
My eyes can't see anything clearly 'cause of this fog inside my head.
Why can't I just move along? Is it because of your smile, your hair, or the way you dance?
I can't tell anymore!

Hey, wait a second! You look like that girl from.... no forget it I forgot. Don't stare
I've only known you for seven seconds!
But for some reason I feel a deep warmth inside.
Can it be that I've seen you before in my life? ...No, it can't be!
What's going on in my life? I just can't seem to get on the right track.
Everyday is another mistake, I just wanna escape this world & manipulate all those around me.
I feel like a freak,now I know how Jason or Freddy must have felt.

Entry for " Why oh Why"
Sponsored by Constance~A Rambling Poet
Written March 16,2010

Written by John Monteblanco
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 5:18 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest..Sara
Augustus Avatar
October 15, 2010 at 2:15 PM
This almost sounds like the person is love struck. Whatever you wrote this I like that as a reader I felt like you were speaking to me. I like that feeling of getting enveloped by someone's written word. Congratulations on getting a win.
Roberts Avatar
October 9, 2010 at 2:21 PM
congrats on your win in the contest
Fraser Avatar
October 9, 2010 at 7:09 AM
Many congratulations John on your win in Constance's contest 'Why oh Why' have a lovely weekend >> James
Brown Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 10:41 AM
Congratulations on your win John. Love,Carol
Neels Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 10:06 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest John ;)
Mehta Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 5:27 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, John
La France Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 4:04 AM
Congratulation, John, on your placement in my contest, Why Oh Why~~
Sweetheart Avatar
October 7, 2010 at 11:54 PM
Congrats John on your win in Constance's contest with this extra special entry luv.. enjoy your sweet victory tonight ...
Dietrich Avatar
October 7, 2010 at 9:46 PM
Congratulations on your fine win, john. WAs this really about what Charles said here below? I didn't get it that way! luv, Andrea
Henderson Avatar
March 16, 2010 at 7:15 PM
John these are exactly some of the things that confuse our older population aflicted with alzheimers. Good write. Charles
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