Memory

As sleet beats the midnight morning,
Through ice specks and fallen leaves' dust,
With Winter's drought yet colored by
A phantasm's war in my skies.

Through ice specks and fallen leaves' dust,
The memory frozen on conscious ways;
A phantasm's war in my skies—
I scope its child in between us.

The memory frozen on conscious ways,
With Winter's drought yet colored by;
I scope its child in between us,
As sleet beats the midnight morning.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Date: 12/19/2023 11:20:00 AM
You do make pantoums seem so easy to write , youv done a flawless one that flows so well and i love your chosen refrains and also how youve written “ A phantasm's war in my skies— I scope its child in between us.” What a line so descriptive and soul stirring! I absolutely loved reading this! Sending you light always
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Date: 12/17/2023 2:47:00 PM
Nice penning Paige with such effects of memories. Have a nice day, Gordon
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Date: 12/17/2023 2:07:00 PM
Hello Paige Hind :-) Very nice poem about memories! Have a very nice day ~AA
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Date: 12/17/2023 7:35:00 AM
I found this poem to be quite moving. Excellent starting entice; instantly captivated and a delight to read.
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Date: 12/16/2023 3:11:00 PM
You did the pantoum well...look forward to one with more stanzas
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Paige Hind
Date: 12/20/2023 5:54:00 PM
This is how I saw this form written before I tried it. Anyway, about medium is how far I get with my poetry, rarely really, really long...not to say, I don't enjoy long poetry. :)
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