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I pen this poem and think fondly of my departed parents in the afterlife -- my father left in July 1998, and my mother since April 2013 -- with feelings of gratitude and love. 

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Memory

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MEMORY
By Leon Enriquez


Ripples in time
Echoes and chimes
Meet misty mimes


Etch in olde sketch
Moments that match
Blur missing patch

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End marks strange start
Rest broken heart
Ink stains word art


Now and Here streams
Glimpse of new dreams
Meet thus new theme

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You in times past
Dance with odd cast
Ending at last


Prize the old days
Tryst simple stay
Rest of end play

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Touch of plain fare
Explains odd wares
Describe strange cares


Pulse in lost strains
Apt as old pains
Report lost gain

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Exit odd fate
Note broken state
Thoughts at the gate


Stillness allots
Sleep beyond plot
Ice cold last slot

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Mind gone away
Old textures stay
Notes yesterday


Ask that the light
Niche warm and bright
Dance and dream flight

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Ere time slides past
Now frames sad cast
Glimpse truth at last


Nice feel greets grace
Echoes now trace
Opt smiles in place

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Etch odd ripple
Note cold drizzle
Rich feel dazzles


Ink stains thus dwell
Quest that prompts tell
Urge in new spell

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Embrace due calm
Zeal spreads fine balm
Here in wise psalm


Etch of new hymn
Rich precious theme
End of old dream

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Leon Enriquez
15 January 2023
Singapore

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 7/27/2023 5:38:00 AM
Long but poignant Leon. David in NZ likes.
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Leon Enriquez
Date: 8/1/2023 8:26:00 AM
Dear David: Thank you. Trust you are keeping well. Leon
Date: 5/23/2023 2:47:00 PM
Leon, a fantastic poem! My condolences for your loss.. Very lovely poem to express your love.
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Leon Enriquez
Date: 6/7/2023 7:58:00 AM
Dear Michael: Thank you. All the best the, Leon.
Date: 5/1/2023 3:55:00 PM
Hello, Leon Enriquez. How are you? I wonder what experience/emotions you went through when you wrote this one. Sorry for your loss. I hope you are getting stronger by the day. This is thoughtful and a meaningful gesture. Blessings
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Leon Enriquez
Date: 5/19/2023 8:02:00 PM
Dear Jesz: Thank you. Sometimes, I feel deeply the departures of both my father and mother. Thus, this poem. Leon
Date: 2/20/2023 7:55:00 PM
Hi Leon, I’m so sorry for your losses and I love your tribute to them. God bless always.
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Leon Enriquez
Date: 2/22/2023 5:23:00 AM
Dear Fin: Thank you for your kind words. All the best then, Leon.
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