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Oh delight, joy and bliss, it is SPRING and it is raining outside; and like a child all I want to do is go play, I remember the drip drop, tinkling of snow melting. Little rivers going down the street that I had to investigate, sometimes, I would take my little brother and he dressed the part; in his yellow slicker, big boots and too big hat, he had to probe sidewalks, it is a beautiful and sweet memory of big sister and little bro in a spring shower. ______________________________ April 11, 2019 Poetry/Free Verse/Memory Copyright Protected, ID 19-1133-964-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Free Verse or Rhyme, In Its Beauty sponsor, Eve Roper, Inspiration Image #1 First Place

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Date: 4/25/2019 11:31:00 AM
- Congratulations on your lovely winning poem, D.H. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Constance La France
Date: 4/26/2019 8:26:00 AM
Anne-Lise, thanks so much for the lovely and the congratulations !
Date: 4/23/2019 8:07:00 PM
So sweet Constance. Congratulations on your deserving first place win! : ) xxoo
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Constance La France
Date: 4/24/2019 7:59:00 AM
Connie, thanks so much for the congratulations !
Date: 4/23/2019 7:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in my contest, Dear Heart. The imagery and emotional feelings of memories are great of the little child! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 4/24/2019 7:59:00 AM
Eve, thanks for another inspiring contest and for my great placement ~
Date: 4/11/2019 9:02:00 PM
What a sweet memory. I have a brother 7 years younger who loved to play in mud. : ) xxoo
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Constance La France
Date: 4/24/2019 8:00:00 AM
Hi Connie, thank you for visiting, my brother is 8 years younger than me ~

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