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Memory

Oh delight, joy and bliss,
it is SPRING and it is raining outside;
and like a child all I want to do is go play,
I remember the drip drop, tinkling of snow melting.
Little rivers going down the street that I had to investigate,
sometimes, I would take my little brother and he dressed the part;
in his yellow slicker, big boots and too big hat, he had to probe sidewalks,
it is a beautiful and sweet memory of big sister and little bro in a spring shower.

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April 11, 2019


Poetry/Free Verse/Memory
Copyright Protected, ID 19-1133-964-02
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.


Written for the contest,  Free Verse or Rhyme, In Its Beauty
sponsor, Eve Roper,  Inspiration Image #1

First Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Andresen Avatar
April 25, 2019 at 11:31 AM
- Congratulations on your lovely winning poem, D.H. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
La France Avatar
April 26, 2019 at 8:26 AM
Anne-Lise, thanks so much for the lovely and the congratulations !
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 23, 2019 at 8:07 PM
So sweet Constance. Congratulations on your deserving first place win! : ) xxoo
La France Avatar
April 24, 2019 at 7:59 AM
Connie, thanks so much for the congratulations !
Roper Avatar
April 23, 2019 at 7:08 PM
Congratulations on your win in my contest, Dear Heart. The imagery and emotional feelings of memories are great of the little child! Hugs Eve ~`*
La France Avatar
April 24, 2019 at 7:59 AM
Eve, thanks for another inspiring contest and for my great placement ~
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 11, 2019 at 9:02 PM
What a sweet memory. I have a brother 7 years younger who loved to play in mud. : ) xxoo
La France Avatar
April 24, 2019 at 8:00 AM
Hi Connie, thank you for visiting, my brother is 8 years younger than me ~
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