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Memories On Branches

How did a cherry kiss? Bitter flower petals with sweet pistils. So laden they act as halos while we breathe the love in a pink hollow, silence sounding like taste, acting like epistle to hold this moment in a silvery image, like moon, or dove low, low, a bowl formed while sunshine flickers above. Chains of yellow petals hang over our deck, the leaves hands-- offer welcome resting branch, our sheltered home. Seeds follow close, fragile like beans, hard case to feed the land crawl before God, they say, be grateful as we weed and stir loam. Together seeds and flowers and hands make a life a poem. Awaiting the sumac, the flame at summer's ending is fruitless we've passed the feathering, the pimping of red underneath bristle the deer horn softness crawling out in oddest places in a mess lining the sand pond, above the purpled iris, the pestle of stone and sun, no rain to bring down sumac's fiery trestle. Vulturous crows squawk and fight the ring-billed sea gulls waiting, one in the bared hollow hands of the cottonwood the other fat-bellied and waddling after rain finally dulls we're under hoodies, under shivers, our neighborhood waits the pinking and mossing, will it unfurl new wood?

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Date: 9/18/2018 3:39:00 PM
Very nicely penned Sheri...Soup mail
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Date: 1/1/2015 1:00:00 PM
That was so pictorial! Exquisite write!
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Date: 4/10/2014 1:42:00 PM
I really enjoyed reading this beautiful poem, once again. A fantastic write, Sheri! Congratulations on your win, as well!...Thank you very much for the kind congrats on my poem. :)
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Date: 4/8/2014 1:03:00 AM
this is OUTSTANDING work. one of the best poems I have read all night and I have been here a long time playing catch up after being gone three days!! just love your imagery. I hope this rated high. congrats. A FAVE
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Date: 4/7/2014 6:08:00 PM
Sheri, , Congratulations, a wonderful win. Thank you:). ~SKAT~
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Date: 4/7/2014 12:05:00 PM
Descriptive of nature's hues in this great winning work..Congrats..Sara
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Sheri Fresonke Harper
Date: 4/7/2014 1:21:00 PM
Thanks Sara!
Date: 4/7/2014 7:45:00 AM
Well said, together they make life a poem, I loved it! Congrats on great win Sheri !!
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Sheri Fresonke Harper
Date: 4/7/2014 1:21:00 PM
Thanks Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 3/27/2014 6:08:00 PM
very poetic in some parts but the last stanza spoiled the beauty of the rest. sorry just being honest.
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Sheri Fresonke Harper
Date: 3/28/2014 7:42:00 PM
No problem John, many of us don't like winter very well.
Date: 3/26/2014 7:28:00 PM
lovely phrase! [the pimping of red underneath bristle]Light & Love
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Sheri Fresonke Harper
Date: 3/28/2014 7:43:00 PM
Thanks Debbie, I appreciate your feedback.
Date: 3/24/2014 2:17:00 PM
how delicately woven, sheri..beauriful!.. SOUP MAIL.. huggs!
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Sheri Fresonke Harper
Date: 3/28/2014 7:44:00 PM
Thanks much Nette
Date: 3/16/2014 5:16:00 PM
I agree with Kelly. Very richly detailed. great imagery. it should do well in the contest.
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Sheri Fresonke Harper
Date: 3/28/2014 7:44:00 PM
Thank you Andrea, appreciate it!
Date: 3/15/2014 5:07:00 PM
I really enjoyed your richly detailed descriptions of nature's beauty. It made the poem come to life and I felt like I was there with you. This is a wonderful poem, Sheri! Good luck in the contest!...Thank you so much for the kind comments. :)
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Sheri Fresonke Harper
Date: 3/28/2014 7:45:00 PM
Kelly, thanks much for your feedback!
Date: 3/12/2014 5:20:00 PM
Well done. The imagery is just fantastic and copiously rich. I particularly liked the pestle metaphor. Good luck in the contest!
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Sheri Fresonke Harper
Date: 3/14/2014 6:14:00 PM
Thanks Roy!
Date: 3/10/2014 6:19:00 PM
This poem draws you in and slowly informs you that it must be read again.Nicely done.
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Sheri Fresonke Harper
Date: 3/14/2014 6:15:00 PM
Thank you John, nice compliment!
Date: 3/10/2014 3:10:00 PM
Reads like a winner for the contest..Very descriptive and expressive one that you have penned..Don't touch the sumac for it might be the poisonous kind..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara
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Sheri Fresonke Harper
Date: 3/14/2014 6:15:00 PM
No poison in that Sumac Sara, thanks much for the feedback and warning!

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