Memories of Love-Ten Words

Memories of Love – Ten Words

Love like a twirling tempest, 
whirled us to an uncharted shore 
of unbridled, sublime, sensuality,
gifting me with moonlit memories 
that would never be forgotten.

How I savored those kisses from your lips… 
milk chocolate lips flavored with the 
lingering tangy taste of fresh, luscious, 
wild, ripened, crimson raspberries…
dipped in cool whipped cream.

Creating sterling silver ripples 
on the ocean, we waltzed by the glow 
of a yellow, ballooned, harvest moon.
Like a singular, silent shadow, we fused
as one igniting entity…silhouettes
painted-in by the black of night.

Youth and dreams may fade away
like scenery from an old water-color painting;
but I’ll always recall, like it was yesterday, 
the ecstasy of love shared, 
when we floated away on a carpet of 
tinsel-lined clouds, cloaked in the grace
of blue-gray, early misty morning.

04-13-2018

Contest:      10 Words
Sponsor:      Joseph May
Placement:   2nd

10 words used: love, tempest, shore, forgotten, crimson, harvest, shadow, 
                       yesterday, grace, misty
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Juman Avatar
August 1, 2018 at 8:46 PM
You are like the God-dess of Love my sweets. Everything is love and I do love that in you. Like I said without the mingling of Love their is nothing.--- Love you my sweets
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August 2, 2018 at 8:36 AM
Awwww - how very sweet of you, Al! I am so appreciative of your wonderful compliments and support - such a great encouragement. Thank you for stopping by! Hugs and best wishes. Pandita
Wigley Avatar
April 24, 2018 at 7:21 AM
A rich and sensual piece, Pandita, congrats! Viv x
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April 24, 2018 at 4:48 PM
Hi Viv, thank you for visiting and leaving your high praises which mean a lot to me! Hugs and best wishes. Pandita
Gentry Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 10:52 PM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful romantic scene.
Sietesantos Avatar
April 24, 2018 at 4:47 PM
Hi Susan, I appreciate your kind congratulatory words! Thank you so much. Hugs. Pandita
Y. Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 5:47 PM
I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis
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April 24, 2018 at 4:44 PM
Thank you again dear Alexis for swinging back with your congratulatory words! Hugs. Pandita
May Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 1:29 PM
Beautifully penned Pandita..Congrats on your win
Sietesantos Avatar
April 24, 2018 at 4:43 PM
Thank you so very much Joseph for including this piece on your winners' list! I am delighted! Hugs. Pandita
Barden Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 12:45 AM
A gorgeous write, Pandita, and a winner for sure! Blessings, Friend! :-) <3
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April 16, 2018 at 10:55 AM
Hi Greg, I am so appreciative of your wonderful compliments and support - such a great encouragement. Thank you for stopping by! Hugs and best wishes. Pandita
Andresen Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 1:44 PM
- Beautiful to read, Pandita ... the words flow with your memories :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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April 14, 2018 at 9:48 AM
Hi Anne-Lise, I hope you are doing well, my friend! Your comments and compliments always mean a lot to me. Thank you very much! Have a beautiful weekend! Hugs. Pandita
Y. Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 10:33 AM
WOW! Pandita, You've penned such a sensual and romantic write with chosen words. It looks like a winner to me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest Well done:-) Alexis
Sietesantos Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 10:42 AM
Dear Alexis, thank you so much for your lovely complimentary words. Have a great weekend! Pandita
Allison Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 10:13 AM
oh such sensual imagery Pandita, such beautiful memories:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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April 13, 2018 at 10:40 AM
Awwww! Thank you so very much, Jan! I appreciate your lovely compliments! Hugs and best wishes. Pandita
Pandit Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 9:41 AM
Fabulous memories..well crafted to win!
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April 13, 2018 at 10:06 AM
Thank you kindly Vijay for your lovely compliments which I so very much appreciate! All the best to you. Pandita
Gauthier Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 9:39 AM
Delightful, Pandita. I particularly love the "sterling silver ripples on the ocean". Beautiful done.
Sietesantos Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 10:05 AM
Thank you my friend for your kind complimentary words! I am happy you enjoyed reading this piece! Hugs. Pandita
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