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Memories of Beauty

Broad strips of land cascading to the sea
Shrouded in an early morning mist
The West Coast’s beauty calls to me
For on this rocky shore, we once kissed
Sweet memories of love that I have missed




December 28, 2019
For Dear Heart’s English Quintain Imagery contest

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Date: 1/19/2020 8:47:00 AM
Carolyn, congratulations on your win in my writing prompt challenge with this beautiful poem of the sea and of lost love _Constance
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Date: 1/14/2020 2:14:00 PM
- A lovely winning poem Carolyn, congratulations :) - // Anne-Lise
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Date: 1/11/2020 8:09:00 PM
this one is beautiful...i love the ocean so the imagery really came to life for me... congratulations on your win :) hugs
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Date: 1/11/2020 5:01:00 AM
I am happy to see this on the winner's list Carolyn. It is beautiful! Congratulations! xxoo
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Date: 1/10/2020 11:53:00 AM
This is beautiful Carolyn, congrats on a fine win!
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Date: 1/5/2020 10:56:00 AM
This is beautiful, and touches at our heart strings, Carolyn. An excellent example of an English Quintain! Hugs // paul
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Date: 1/3/2020 10:11:00 PM
Hello Carolyn … picturesque romantic image. Well done Carolyn - Lindsay
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Date: 1/1/2020 11:17:00 PM
Beautiful and loving poem. Best for a win. Hugs.
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Date: 1/1/2020 8:45:00 PM
A romantic beauty Carolyn! Some memories never fade. I wish you the happiest of new years! : ) xxoo
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Date: 1/1/2020 8:08:00 PM
Ah, such an exquisite blending of nature and romance, Carolyn. Bravo! Happy New Year to you and yours, Gershon
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Date: 1/1/2020 1:02:00 PM
You have definitely captured the imagery aspect beautifully Carolyn!
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Date: 1/1/2020 12:26:00 PM
Sounds like a sweet ol' song Carolyn, love how you dropped the last two lines; good expression is all about good meter, tense and tone --- this poem leaves the reader on that rocky shore with sweet kisses...a welcomed finale;-) happy new year wonderful!
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Date: 12/31/2019 7:14:00 PM
A loveley Write. Happy 2020 Carolyn. :0)
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Date: 12/31/2019 2:37:00 PM
- Memories are so precious, dear Carolyn - Lovely written :) - Good luck in the contest :) - I wish you a peaceful and wonderful New Year :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/31/2019 10:18:00 AM
I know exactly what you mean! Wonderful poem Panagiota xxx
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Date: 12/31/2019 9:20:00 AM
Beautiful, Carolyn. Such a scenic view :) Wishing you a very Wonderful, Healthy and Happy New Year! Charlie xo
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Date: 12/31/2019 1:37:00 PM
Thank you, Charlie! Happy New Year to you as well. Hugs from a Jersey gal.
Date: 12/30/2019 10:19:00 PM
Lovely, Carolyn, happy new years!
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Date: 12/30/2019 5:40:00 AM
Beautifully written, sweet memories, Carolyn. Best wishes for the contest. T.J
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Date: 12/30/2019 12:57:00 AM
Carolyn, I can hear the call to arms, both found in a warmth, together in the setting of the western sun. -Richard
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Date: 12/29/2019 4:42:00 PM
This is amazing and reminds me of squatting one night off highway 10. I could taste the salt in the air! Well done Carolyn, A FAV for me!......pat
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Date: 12/29/2019 4:18:00 PM
Poignance and beauty in this one, CArolyn.
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Date: 12/29/2019 12:51:00 PM
This is just exquisite penning. Gorgeous. A winner for sure, Carolyn. Cheers, Gershon
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Date: 12/29/2019 6:29:00 AM
Lovely memories stay with you forever Caroline. Happy New year to you. Tom
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Date: 12/28/2019 7:14:00 PM
wonderful imagery in your poem that is also tinged with sadness, good luck in the contest Carolyn:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/28/2019 5:10:00 PM
Great imagery in your Quintain, Carolyn--all the best.
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