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Memories of a Bygone Spring

In the dusting of the spring time, Sweet scented thoughts of yesterday, Make my sulky heart sing and chime, For memories that won’t fade away. The buds on trees now softly sway, Reminding me of love once shared, Of moments that have slipped away, Of trices when we truly cared. But time keeps ticking on and on, And life moves forward with its stride, Yet in my heart, the memories dawn, Of love and laughter by our side. I long for one more sweet embrace, One more chance to see you heartface!

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Date: 1/14/2024 6:01:00 AM
I have read your work and enjoyed reading it. Keep on writing, using your creative muse. Very romantic memories. Sara K
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Saivi Kurian
Date: 1/14/2024 10:45:00 AM
Thank you Sara for your feedback.
Date: 7/5/2023 3:25:00 PM
As beautiful and vibrant as spring. A lovely poem, Saivi. And I see you won a contest--BIG congrats!
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Saivi Kurian
Date: 7/5/2023 7:12:00 PM
Thanks a ton Mr.Vijay for your valuable feedback.
Date: 6/20/2023 12:32:00 PM
Sentimental and nostalgic sonnet. Congratulations on your win.
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Saivi Kurian
Date: 6/20/2023 7:27:00 PM
I sincerely appreciate your time taken to read my poem. Thank you so much Mr.Jay.
Date: 6/19/2023 8:51:00 PM
Nostalgic and highly poetic. "time keeps ticking on and on, And life moves forward with its stride", "I long for one more sweet embrace, One more chance to see you" - Great work, indeed. Congratulations!
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Saivi Kurian
Date: 6/20/2023 4:40:00 AM
Thank you so much for your feedback.
Date: 6/19/2023 12:23:00 PM
I thank you graciously for entering my contest. Your springtime poetic apertures have claimed my heart. Congratulations on your win. Be Proud Of Your Successes, Always !
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Saivi Kurian
Date: 6/19/2023 7:14:00 PM
Thank you so much Mystic Rose. I'm overwhelmed that my poem is recognised and won the contest.
Date: 6/16/2023 9:46:00 AM
Nice! I like the work on the last stanza
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Saivi Kurian
Date: 6/16/2023 10:46:00 AM
Thank you Arastu for taking your time to read.

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