Line Gauthier Poet Verse

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Memories In the Making

Forty million stars aglow
Neath a midnight satin sky
While a dark sensuous serenade lurks
Astride the breeze in ambush wantonly 
The temptress moon suspiciously hangs low

A magical atmosphere
It sets the tone for romance
Love’s breath is in the air infectuous
As arm in arm by the seashore we stroll 
Breathing in the chilly seasalt freshness

Love’s slow dance voluptuous
Pure youthful and unblemished
Detonating carefree exuberance
Glitters glint with every ludic footstep
As the moonlight sprinkles her magic dust

Forever eternally
Wishing time could just stand still 
Divine perfection in every moment
Tonight’s unparalleled emotion shared
Frozen to be remembered for all times

Timid smiles turn to kisses
As two hearts entwine as one



AP: Honorable Mention 2020

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Sandra Haight March 7, 2018 at 11:05 AM Line, this is such a beautiful, romantic poem, full of imagery and so well-written to meet the challenging rules! Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra Line Gauthier March 7, 2018 at 12:38 PM Thank you, Sandra. Much appreciated visit and comment.

Mike Gentile March 6, 2018 at 8:31 AM This is a wonderful poem of love, Line. It makes me yearn to experience this once more! I really enjoyed it xxoo Line Gauthier March 6, 2018 at 8:54 AM Thanks, Mike. Most appreciated. I wish you all the best.

Richard Lamoureux March 6, 2018 at 7:46 AM This is indeed a beauty. Good luck in the contest.

Silent One March 6, 2018 at 6:01 AM Stunning imagery, nice lines flow through out this poem... Line Gauthier March 6, 2018 at 7:00 AM Thank you for your kind visit and comment, SO.

Tom Cunningham March 6, 2018 at 12:43 AM Great imagery Line, I could just picture it. You've done this so well. Good luck. Tom Line Gauthier March 6, 2018 at 7:00 AM Thank you, Tom. Much appreciated.

Gershon Wolf March 5, 2018 at 8:44 PM A beauty, Line. The freshness and innocence bursts right through each line, ascending to the climax. Nicely done! :) Gershon Line Gauthier March 6, 2018 at 6:59 AM Thank you for your much appreciated visit and comment, Gershon.

Juli- Michelle March 5, 2018 at 6:57 PM "timid smiles turn to kisses" this line is GOLDEN! Love, Juli-Michelle Line Gauthier March 5, 2018 at 8:28 PM Thank you so much, Juli-Michelle. Much appreciated.

Frederic Parker March 5, 2018 at 6:06 PM nice picture of pure romance with the moonlit sea as a backdrop...a moment remembered or imagination rendered either way nicely done...good luck in the contest Line Gauthier March 5, 2018 at 6:54 PM Thank you so much, Frederic. Much appreciated.