Memories In the Making

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Forty million stars aglow Neath a midnight satin sky While a dark sensuous serenade lurks Astride the breeze in ambush wantonly The temptress moon suspiciously hangs low A magical atmosphere It sets the tone for romance Love’s breath is in the air infectuous As arm in arm by the seashore we stroll Breathing in the chilly seasalt freshness Love’s slow dance voluptuous Pure youthful and unblemished Detonating carefree exuberance Glitters glint with every ludic footstep As the moonlight sprinkles her magic dust Forever eternally Wishing time could just stand still Divine perfection in every moment Tonight’s unparalleled emotion shared Frozen to be remembered for all times Timid smiles turn to kisses As two hearts entwine as one
AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on March 5, 2018 for contest SEVEN-TEN sponsored by EMILE PINET and on March 6, 2018 for EARLY MAR 18 STANDARD CONTEST sponsored by BRIAN STRAND

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Date: 3/7/2018 11:05:00 AM
Line, this is such a beautiful, romantic poem, full of imagery and so well-written to meet the challenging rules! Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/7/2018 12:38:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra. Much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 3/6/2018 8:31:00 AM
This is a wonderful poem of love, Line. It makes me yearn to experience this once more! I really enjoyed it xxoo
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/6/2018 8:54:00 AM
Thanks, Mike. Most appreciated. I wish you all the best.
Date: 3/6/2018 7:46:00 AM
This is indeed a beauty. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 3/6/2018 6:01:00 AM
Stunning imagery, nice lines flow through out this poem...
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/6/2018 7:00:00 AM
Thank you for your kind visit and comment, SO.
Date: 3/6/2018 12:43:00 AM
Great imagery Line, I could just picture it. You've done this so well. Good luck. Tom
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/6/2018 7:00:00 AM
Thank you, Tom. Much appreciated.
Date: 3/5/2018 8:44:00 PM
A beauty, Line. The freshness and innocence bursts right through each line, ascending to the climax. Nicely done! :) Gershon
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Date: 3/6/2018 6:59:00 AM
Thank you for your much appreciated visit and comment, Gershon.
Date: 3/5/2018 6:57:00 PM
"timid smiles turn to kisses" this line is GOLDEN! Love, Juli-Michelle
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/5/2018 8:28:00 PM
Thank you so much, Juli-Michelle. Much appreciated.
Date: 3/5/2018 6:06:00 PM
nice picture of pure romance with the moonlit sea as a backdrop...a moment remembered or imagination rendered either way nicely done...good luck in the contest
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/5/2018 6:54:00 PM
Thank you so much, Frederic. Much appreciated.
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