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Memories Held Within -Contest

I close my eyes, Cant see the life around me just the memories held within Of holding hands walking through the rain. The first kiss with raindrops watering our lips The smile of bewilderment when love enters my heart The frown of doubt when we say goodnight Doubt if you'll return the wonder when you do. Speaking words of love through loving lips The lips that kiss my eyelids, Waking me gently to a life of love hope and happiness Penned July 7 2013 Contest Late at Night

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Skat A

Date: 8/9/2013 7:37:00 PM

TERRIFIC ~SKAT~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/8/2013 9:41:00 PM

Seren enjoyed your late night poem. CONGRATULATIONS!!! :-) :-) :-) in Nathan's contest... Linda

Nathan D.

Date: 8/8/2013 8:28:00 PM

well done Nate

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/8/2013 8:17:00 AM

Some of your best words, so romantic!!.........being a night owl seems to be magic for your muse!! This is beautiful !!

Seren Roberts
Date: 7/8/2013 12:10:00 PM

Yes I am a night owl... Thanks Carrie ...Seren

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/8/2013 5:41:00 AM

This is an awesome poem that you wrote late at night...are you a late nighter like me? I stay up late and write all my poetry usually late at night anyway! This is a clever idea for a contest, I just wish I had come up with it...speaking of contests, I believe mine is ready to judge...I think I'll look into that this morning after all my commenting! I really loved this poem my friend! What a fabulous piece, Great Work!!

Seren Roberts
Date: 7/8/2013 12:10:00 PM

Many thanks Russell ... Seren