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ANOTHER from my MEMORY BANK ANTHOLOGY

Candles & nightlights flickering bright blackout curtains shutting out the moonlight snuggle down cosy blankets tight perhaps the war will end to-night dripping setting from Sunday's roast spread so thick on Monday's toast meat bones simmer ..on the old gas ring Pa's homemade soup the 'real thing' paper chains cut & glued beer in glass bottles brewed Christmas puddings with threepenny bits the Meccano present made to fit Sunday school outings upto Coombe hill my first ever train ride so quite a thrill Walks over corn fields to the Bugle Horn crisps and lemonade upon their lawn A weekly soak in a round tin bath towelling off by open fire in the hearth. a viewpoint from childhood seen growing up at number sixteen Beech green Year Posted 2012

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Date: 6/7/2021 1:01:00 PM
Wonderfully atmospheric..I can almost see a coal fire next to that tin bath and feel ice on the inside of the windows without any of these being mentioned. To me that's a great skill of the writer. Your poem, Brian may be based on personal experiences but it is also accessible and identifiable at the same time. Cheers - Gary
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Brian Strand
Date: 6/7/2021 2:34:00 PM
Those were the days Gary,thru a childhood haze
Date: 6/6/2021 1:52:00 AM
"dripping setting from Sunday's roast spread so thick on Monday's toast" fond memories wonderful poem. Thank you
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Brian Strand
Date: 6/6/2021 3:38:00 AM
In the days of true definition of poverty Terry.Cheers

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