Memories:

Multiple memories Make us wish upon more, Much the same way as love. Melodies heard in bliss, Moving to the music More out of love than need. Moments that shall reflect. (6 syllables per line) For Pleiades M contest Sponsored by: Kim Merryman

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Vicki Acquah

Date: 4/28/2017 4:57:00 PM

thank you for this learning experience in 6 syllables per line.

White Wolf
Date: 4/28/2017 6:37:00 PM

You are welcome, Vicki /|\

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/25/2017 6:55:00 AM

Congrats, WW!

White Wolf
Date: 4/25/2017 6:58:00 AM

Thank you, Kim /|\

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/23/2017 1:58:00 PM

- A great poem on the letter "M" - Congratulations on your winning poem, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

White Wolf
Date: 4/23/2017 7:07:00 PM

Thank you very much, Anne-Lise! Enjoy your day my friend /|\

Agnes Krampe

Date: 4/23/2017 7:50:00 AM

I love that you wrote about music in the context of memories. I find that music brings me back to times and places when I heard it first, or in a special situation - much like smells. Congrats on your win.

White Wolf
Date: 4/23/2017 7:06:00 PM

Yes, you are so right there, Agnes! And thank you for your visit and comment today /|\

Lisa Ricci

Date: 4/20/2017 8:22:00 AM

Hello White Wolf. I'm very impressed. Your execution with the format is marvelous. You made it flow with ease. There was never any pause. The theme you chose is timeless. Well done in its entirety. Good luck with the contest. You always write with such elegance and more.

White Wolf
Date: 4/20/2017 6:57:00 PM

Yes, as you have noticed, I'm trying my hand on a few contests lately! I usually don't enter so many but had some spare time! Thank you for your comment /|\

Chris Green

Date: 4/19/2017 7:13:00 AM

There will always be that one song that when you hear it, it takes you back to a place and time, maybe special, maybe painful, but music has that effect. I have a few like that, "Could it be I'm falling in love" by the Spinners is one that just whisks me away to a wonderful point in my life. Your poem wonderfully tells this. Nicely done my friend.

White Wolf
Date: 4/19/2017 7:37:00 AM

Yes, one of mine is "Solsbury Hill" by Peter Gabriel. I simply love the music and the lyrics speak to me like the eagle speaks to him! Thanks, Chris! Enjoy your day mate /|\