Memories:

Multiple memories

Make us wish upon more,

Much the same way as love.

Melodies heard in bliss,

Moving to the music

More out of love than need.

Moments that shall reflect.


(6 syllables per line)

For Pleiades M contest
Sponsored by: Kim Merryman

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Vicki Acquah

April 28, 2017 at 4:57 PM

thank you for this learning experience in 6 syllables per line.

White Wolf

April 28, 2017 at 6:37 PM

You are welcome, Vicki /|\

Kim Rodrigues

April 25, 2017 at 6:55 AM

Congrats, WW!

White Wolf

April 25, 2017 at 6:58 AM

Thank you, Kim /|\

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 23, 2017 at 1:58 PM

- A great poem on the letter "M" - Congratulations on your winning poem, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

White Wolf

April 23, 2017 at 7:07 PM

Thank you very much, Anne-Lise! Enjoy your day my friend /|\

Agnes Krampe

April 23, 2017 at 7:50 AM

I love that you wrote about music in the context of memories. I find that music brings me back to times and places when I heard it first, or in a special situation - much like smells. Congrats on your win.

White Wolf

April 23, 2017 at 7:06 PM

Yes, you are so right there, Agnes! And thank you for your visit and comment today /|\

Lisa Ricci

April 20, 2017 at 8:22 AM

Hello White Wolf. I'm very impressed. Your execution with the format is marvelous. You made it flow with ease. There was never any pause. The theme you chose is timeless. Well done in its entirety. Good luck with the contest. You always write with such elegance and more.

White Wolf

April 20, 2017 at 6:57 PM

Yes, as you have noticed, I'm trying my hand on a few contests lately! I usually don't enter so many but had some spare time! Thank you for your comment /|\

Chris Green

April 19, 2017 at 7:13 AM

There will always be that one song that when you hear it, it takes you back to a place and time, maybe special, maybe painful, but music has that effect. I have a few like that, "Could it be I'm falling in love" by the Spinners is one that just whisks me away to a wonderful point in my life. Your poem wonderfully tells this. Nicely done my friend.

White Wolf

April 19, 2017 at 7:37 AM

Yes, one of mine is "Solsbury Hill" by Peter Gabriel. I simply love the music and the lyrics speak to me like the eagle speaks to him! Thanks, Chris! Enjoy your day mate /|\