Memories

I've grown old with grace, but a memory of walking side by side holding each other's hand nourishing closeness and intimacy sparks. His grandfather clock chimes its time, breaking the silence of my nourishing blissful memories, teasing my mournful mind. memories echo brings back you wrapped in my arms never felt so lost 6/27/2020 A Memory Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

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Aditi Mishra

Date: 7/26/2020 8:26:00 AM

A heartfelt and beautiful muse from your pen Eve. Congratulations on your win. Hope you are well my dear. Blessings and love :)

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 7/14/2020 1:42:00 PM

Beautiful and sad, gorgeous piece Eve. Congratulations for your win, xomo

Jcb Brul

Date: 7/13/2020 8:34:00 PM

So sweet and romantic dear Eve.. I love this Haibun.A fave!!

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 7/9/2020 3:30:00 AM

A passionate memory. Well said...

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/3/2020 6:06:00 AM

Heartfelt and wonderful, Eve.

Sandra Adams

Date: 6/28/2020 10:37:00 PM

wow... love the way the memory came to life in this one... gorgeous write Eve... good luck in the contest though I feel it is a winner already :) hugs

Jcb Brul

Date: 6/28/2020 5:52:00 PM

"brings back you wrapped in my arms never felt so lost" oh, the comforting sweet embrace! A FAVE!!!!!

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/28/2020 5:05:00 PM

Your memory are golden here, and so is your sweet melancholic poetry, xo

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/28/2020 4:28:00 PM

Sigh. The sadness is felt. Well-done, Eve, and G.L. in Line's contest! Cheers, Gershon

Ricky Muse

Date: 6/28/2020 2:18:00 PM

Diggin' this. "teasing my mournful mind" speaks for me.

Eric Boddie

Date: 6/28/2020 12:08:00 PM

as long as a single memory exists....you can always bask in the Bliss....so there is never any loss....yet dwelling is a hefty cost....because we must keep it moving, cant be stuck in 1 place....there are always new memories to be made to implement smiles to any face....i felt this mrs roper....as always....;)

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 6/28/2020 6:03:00 AM

memory; delightful memory always brings some happy feelings......beautiful haibun

John Watt

Date: 6/28/2020 12:34:00 AM

Eve, so poignant and personal, hauntingly beautiful. I loved the grandfather clock part. Best wishes with this wonderful write. Hugs ~ John