Memories

I've grown old with grace, but a memory of walking side by side holding each other's hand nourishing closeness and intimacy sparks.
   His grandfather clock chimes its time, breaking the silence of my nourishing blissful memories, teasing my mournful mind.


memories echo
brings back you wrapped in my arms
never felt so lost

6/27/2020


A Memory Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by: Line Gauthier
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Mishra Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 8:26 AM
A heartfelt and beautiful muse from your pen Eve. Congratulations on your win. Hope you are well my dear. Blessings and love :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 14, 2020 at 1:42 PM
Beautiful and sad, gorgeous piece Eve. Congratulations for your win, xomo
Brul Avatar
July 13, 2020 at 8:34 PM
So sweet and romantic dear Eve.. I love this Haibun.A fave!!
Neumann Avatar
July 9, 2020 at 3:30 AM
A passionate memory. Well said...
Krutsinger Avatar
July 3, 2020 at 6:06 AM
Heartfelt and wonderful, Eve.
Adams Avatar
June 28, 2020 at 10:37 PM
wow... love the way the memory came to life in this one... gorgeous write Eve... good luck in the contest though I feel it is a winner already :) hugs
Brul Avatar
June 28, 2020 at 5:52 PM
"brings back you wrapped in my arms never felt so lost" oh, the comforting sweet embrace! A FAVE!!!!!
Rose  Avatar
June 28, 2020 at 5:05 PM
Your memory are golden here, and so is your sweet melancholic poetry, xo
Wolf Avatar
June 28, 2020 at 4:28 PM
Sigh. The sadness is felt. Well-done, Eve, and G.L. in Line's contest! Cheers, Gershon
Evans Avatar
June 28, 2020 at 2:18 PM
Diggin' this. "teasing my mournful mind" speaks for me.
Boddie Avatar
June 28, 2020 at 12:08 PM
as long as a single memory exists....you can always bask in the Bliss....so there is never any loss....yet dwelling is a hefty cost....because we must keep it moving, cant be stuck in 1 place....there are always new memories to be made to implement smiles to any face....i felt this mrs roper....as always....;)
Bangalee Avatar
June 28, 2020 at 6:03 AM
memory; delightful memory always brings some happy feelings......beautiful haibun
Watt Avatar
June 28, 2020 at 12:34 AM
Eve, so poignant and personal, hauntingly beautiful. I loved the grandfather clock part. Best wishes with this wonderful write. Hugs ~ John
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace