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Memorable You

Memorable You When I had you as my first. I found you whom I really in love I thought this is my everlasting love. Were happy at the beginning, We found ourselves completely, Happiness like such no ending. Lovers to be so called perfectly! We dreamed so many, Many as it would likely to be. For we look bright sunny Upon us this is what we see. Love takes a good sound For us loving around. And more life to enjoy! But chance was so greedy, He ended our love story. For we found were relative Truth that cannot be retrieve. Even I don’t want to lose you. For this is the right thing to do Very SORRY on you! My heart spins with dart It’s so hard on my part. I’ve been handle this over years My eyes replied with tears! Until the time I wake up I realized I need to move on And continue my life sailing on I had to step up! I look at the sky cheerfully Take the failures bravely. I have enlighten my mind That you were not the one I find. Loving you is not to be regret For once you took my breath, Experience is the best I’ve gain In spite of all the pain! For we are now moving in a different way, I never conclude neither expect. I’m happy you part on my journey My experience was so memorable for me. I’ve learned in my life. Acceptance had been mine! Nothing more to say May god bless you day by day!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/23/2016 12:21:00 PM
Nice to see this one again, Carmina, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/16/2016 4:18:00 PM
enjoyed reading your poem again. skat
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Date: 12/11/2015 2:49:00 PM
Hi Carmina, this is such an excellent first posting that I enjoyed reading! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7 (which is the highest score you can get or receive)! Pandita
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Carmina Lebosada
Date: 12/12/2015 3:21:00 AM
Thank you madam. I'm happy to be part of this group and to share my poems. Thank you for the overwhelming sound :D
Date: 12/10/2015 5:13:00 PM
Carmina, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Carmina Lebosada
Date: 12/12/2015 3:29:00 AM
Thank you madam. Its nice to be part of this group where I can share with those with same fashion. :)
Date: 12/10/2015 12:11:00 PM
Carmina, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Carmina Lebosada
Date: 12/12/2015 3:37:00 AM
Hello madam Skat.. Thank You so much. I started to start making poems on my later years in high school. Since then I do rhyming of words to create a narration. Most of my works base on personal experiences that gives a meaning on my pieces. :)
Date: 12/10/2015 4:45:00 AM
very good carmina. welcome to soup
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