Mario De Paz Poet Free verse

Memorable Vacations

We were together
On sandy beach
Sweet wind caressing
My hair with sun.
One month it lasted
With sound of sea
And our kisses
Shiny delight.
One month of love
Which still now lasts
Deeply in my mind
With sound of sea 
and our kisses
Shiny delight.

5/4/2015

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Samiha Zubair September 3, 2015 at 7:41 AM A good write. Brings back a lot of memories

Poet Destroyer A May 9, 2015 at 7:44 PM Mario, this is sweet. One day I wish to have a vacation like this. Congratulations with your "Memorable Vacation win" Love LINDA Mario De Paz May 11, 2015 at 5:00 AM Thank you LInda, you are always so kind wiyh me

Skat A May 9, 2015 at 6:52 PM Mario, congratulations in Shadow's contest. Forever SKAT Mario De Paz May 11, 2015 at 5:01 AM thank you, Skat, it is always a pleasure to hear from you

Jan Allison May 8, 2015 at 6:19 PM Dropping back with my congrats Mario:-) Hugs Jan xx Mario De Paz May 11, 2015 at 5:03 AM Thank you Jan, I love your dropping back

Shadow Hamilton May 8, 2015 at 6:07 PM lovely Mario congrats on placing hugs Mario De Paz May 11, 2015 at 5:04 AM thank you Shadow, it is very kind of you coming here

M. L. Kiser May 6, 2015 at 6:54 AM I like this one; best of luck. Mario De Paz May 6, 2015 at 9:00 AM Thank you so much for commenting and wishes

Jan Allison May 4, 2015 at 12:16 PM ohhhhhh how romantic - where did this holiday take place ... tell me more!!!! hugs Jan xxx good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Mario De Paz May 5, 2015 at 2:32 AM It was long time ago with my wife, before we got married. She lived in Rome and I lived in Genoa. That summer we went together nearby Rome at the sea coast on the beach every day ,,,,, Thanks for coming and commenting