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Visiting Dad's grave in bite of winter-- charmed locket hangs with memoirs as tears spill on snapshots Form K - Kimo Contest 4/6/2017 Sponsor: Broken Wings checked with howmanysyllables.com

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Date: 4/10/2017 10:30:00 PM
So sad yet so beautifully penned. The emotion in few words is stunning. I love your use of a "Locket". They are so intimate and not often worn or written about today. Lovely writing nette:) lynnxxx
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Date: 4/10/2017 8:33:00 AM
beautiful! so soothing yet sadly beautiful- congrats on your placement :)
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Date: 4/10/2017 4:37:00 AM
This is simply stunning Nette! Congratulations on being awarded first place! ; ) 7
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Date: 4/7/2017 11:57:00 AM
Sad one.Beautifully written Nette. How are you?
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Date: 4/7/2017 11:40:00 AM
The grave, winter and the keepsake project sadness; the poem itself is beautiful, Nette! Congratulations on placing first! Hugs // paul
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Date: 4/7/2017 10:40:00 AM
So Sadly well done Nette, congratulations...
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Date: 4/7/2017 9:29:00 AM
Beautiful Nette, congrats!
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Date: 4/7/2017 9:01:00 AM
Congrats on a great win Nette
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Date: 4/7/2017 8:24:00 AM
Nette congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautiful Kimo, I love it.
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Date: 4/7/2017 7:13:00 AM
Short yet deep.... Congrats Nette, for your well-deserved first placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 4/7/2017 5:33:00 AM
Congrats on you top placement, Nette: Grief captured in a nutshell. Hugs, SuZ
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Date: 4/7/2017 2:05:00 AM
Very powerful write! Congratulations on your first place win!
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Date: 4/6/2017 11:18:00 PM
A 7 for this moving top-winning poem, Nette! Janice
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Date: 4/6/2017 9:50:00 PM
a sad one and so well done, Nette. Congrats on your top win as well.
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Date: 4/6/2017 9:42:00 AM
Excellent Kimo, nette ... a sure win ...
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Date: 4/6/2017 7:23:00 AM
Great Kimo, nette - good luck in the contest.
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Date: 4/6/2017 4:46:00 AM
- Lovely written, Nette - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/6/2017 3:18:00 AM
Sensitively, astoundingly handled.I was touched! Thank you!
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