Nette Onclaud Poet Kimo

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Memoirs On Keepsake

Visiting Dad's grave in bite of winter--

                 charmed locket hangs  with memoirs

             as tears spill on snapshots




Form K - Kimo Contest   4/6/2017
Sponsor: Broken Wings  checked with howmanysyllables.com

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Lynn Marie April 10, 2017 at 10:30 PM So sad yet so beautifully penned. The emotion in few words is stunning. I love your use of a "Locket". They are so intimate and not often worn or written about today. Lovely writing nette:) lynnxxx

Beautiful Scars April 10, 2017 at 8:33 AM beautiful! so soothing yet sadly beautiful- congrats on your placement :)

Connie Marcum Wong April 10, 2017 at 4:37 AM This is simply stunning Nette! Congratulations on being awarded first place! ; ) 7

Kash Poet April 7, 2017 at 11:57 AM Sad one.Beautifully written Nette. How are you?

Paul Callus April 7, 2017 at 11:40 AM The grave, winter and the keepsake project sadness; the poem itself is beautiful, Nette! Congratulations on placing first! Hugs // paul

Charlie Smith April 7, 2017 at 10:40 AM So Sadly well done Nette, congratulations...

Sara Chansarkar April 7, 2017 at 9:29 AM Beautiful Nette, congrats!

Joseph May April 7, 2017 at 9:01 AM Congrats on a great win Nette

Constance La France April 7, 2017 at 8:24 AM Nette congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautiful Kimo, I love it.

Teddy Kimathi April 7, 2017 at 7:13 AM Short yet deep.... Congrats Nette, for your well-deserved first placement in the contest!! ;-)

Suzanne Delaney April 7, 2017 at 5:33 AM Congrats on you top placement, Nette: Grief captured in a nutshell. Hugs, SuZ

John Michaels April 7, 2017 at 2:05 AM Very powerful write! Congratulations on your first place win!

Janice Canerdy April 6, 2017 at 11:18 PM A 7 for this moving top-winning poem, Nette! Janice

Andrea Dietrich April 6, 2017 at 9:50 PM a sad one and so well done, Nette. Congrats on your top win as well.

Probir Gupta April 6, 2017 at 9:42 AM Excellent Kimo, nette ... a sure win ...

Agnes Krampe April 6, 2017 at 7:23 AM Great Kimo, nette - good luck in the contest.

Anne-Lise Andresen April 6, 2017 at 4:46 AM - Lovely written, Nette - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Rhoma Em April 6, 2017 at 3:18 AM Sensitively, astoundingly handled.I was touched! Thank you!